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Fantasy · Daoist_Drumstick
Y'all, this story is awesome! Love the bond between Viktor and his familiar Opal. It's fun, it's unique, and it's got me hooked. I seriously can't wait to see what's next!
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The sentence flow is good.
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Sorcerer's Shadow
Fantasy · Daoist_Drumstick