Moments 2
11mth
Commented It was a game?
I swiftly closed the game and turned off my PC and jumped on the bed, and covered myself with the sheets. As my mother came through the door saying, "Get up, it's getting late. You don't wanna be late for your first day of school, do you, Ali‽"
Life of Alistair
Realistic · Lightning_Zed
In the first chapter as the name mentioned just the introduction of the protagonist and that by itself was pretty good for a complete beginner webnovel author. In the second chapter, the story development is actually perfect if you ask me. It is going like how it would in real life scenarios as well. Till now the, 2nd chapter, it is realistic and I will encourage you all to read it as well and promote this novel. The author lightning zed is publishing everyday which is great, but as more chapters go by I would appreciate you publish like weekly or 2 weeks once, cause we need quality not quantity. As the novel is in the first stages daily publishes is amazing. I am looking forward towards the next chapters and I am your first review and first fan, so don't forget me lol.
Life of Alistair
Realistic · Lightning_Zed