it's all right thanks for the amazing series.
ch 83 No chap today
Video Games · loskro
He remind me of Paul.
"Until you pull the entire tree off the ground, no rest, " Said Kota while he stared at the big eyes of Magikarp.
Fantasy · VILLIAN_MAKER
Thanks man! I hope you like the next chapter.
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I thought he had photographic memory
"Man remembering something you don't understand is much harder than I thought" Kirito was honestly tired at this point.
Anime & Comics · kamidemond
That's totally alright my friend but, I recommend you read ch4,5,6 7,8 I'm going to upload these chapters today and if I can't finish all these today then on Saturday. This chapters will contain the stats of the players and every feature that they will obtain if you don't like the parts where the gods are talking about it I recommend you just read these chapters when I upload them and you should understand the story pretty well.
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Thanks for the correction man it should be updated. By the way how are you liking this story so far.
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Can you specify where ? Also thank you for commenting here my very first comment after restarting this fanfic
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I love this book I hope you guys like this book to. I plan to make it more detailed as the story goes on I hope you guys are willing to watch and read the story more because I think it has a lot of the potential
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Thank you man I'm happy you're here I'm glad you liked this story I hope you check out the remaining chapters when I upload them again.
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Thank you I am glad your here to check out my new book.I am sure that you the same person who check out my other books the last time so I am happy to see you here again.
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thank you for the advice my friend I have already try to add they spaces into my other stories I am still tigoring out how to properly at the dialogue as I don't know but I will start adding dialogue as soon as possible also I accidentally click complete on this book so I cannot upload on this book anymore so please check out my order books which I will start uploading on Saturdays and Sundays
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thank you my friend I have already started implement in chapter 7
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I know my friend thank you for the idea I think I'm going to have him become the champion of this Kanto region I'm just train his new team for the next 3 years I was thinking of doing this you got any advice thank . thank you for giving me some advice on the story
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I know but I wanted to make sure he would be the same age as ash and go on a journey at the same time as ash
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I know I made his wishes kind of bad but it was my first time writing so I was nervous nerves and I tried to make it look like he was a machine but had they got feeling to help his sister.
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hello friend thank you for the advice I'll make sure to add"" in the next chapter I hope you come join me and check out one of my books mha wings of God
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hey man I'm glad your back I hope you like this story yeah I notice both of my story why not detailed enough so I'll try to make this a lot better
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Writing Quality- I felt not this writing quality was top notch man 10 out of 10. stable updates - I have no clue about this stable updates but it looks like he finished his story in a year so he uploaded 105 chapters in 12 months I don't know I can't tell how many words are in each chapter but I feel it was above 1000. character design - I felt his character was all over the place and that he did really have a definite personality he's calling ang for wanting to go save his best and only friend the next moment he wants to help all the children. I also think there was no moment where I could see him developed as character starting of the story he was cold by the end of this story he was still cold and manipulator maybe a bit kinder but I can't tell if that was even noticeable until he helped children and that to the second time he helped clean the slums was because of a quest. overall I don't think character design our character development was really well done . world background - I mean he didn't really build the world's it fanfic and avatar is always 10 out of 10.
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Anime & Comics · HolyJoker