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male LV 3Sucktifer Is the best author to ever exist and I am him!!!
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weaving through the car interior sounds weird, you could use spread through or sum else
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Second Act: My New Life With A System
Urban · Artoriuss
What makes us any different from animals? we are simply smarter animals, we are not gods or anything special, we are just born with different talents, the fact that you see us humans as above everything else is incredibly egotistical. Also, the fact that you believe that anyone should live a life of pain and suffering rather than experience tranquility is genuinely incredible.
Of course Rock wasn't his real name, but a nickname given to him by the people working in the construction site with him as he didn't like to talk that much. Rock didn't have a real name from his parents, he was an orphan, and he grew up in a house complex owned by the government for orphaned children. The government sends food to those houses once a week but it wasn't enough for the kids there to feed themselves. The orphanages were all full and that's why the government created these houses and sent food to the children but a lot of them still died due to hunger or illnesses as there was no one to take care of them even when they were ill. Rock stayed there until he was 12. He could fight the other children for the food, but even then it was not enough to feed himself so he decided to leave.
Monarch of Time
Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian
fr
Approaching us with a wide grin that matched his wild energy, he boomed, "By the King, I've never witnessed youngsters as audacious as you!" His gaze danced between us, briefly pausing on Ynos before a nod of approval followed. "You must be the esteemed destroyer's family," he declared, his voice carrying a blend of camaraderie and respect.
Reborn as a DRAGON
Fantasy · Immortal_Simo
bc of how much we fear death everyone thinks death is the worst thing ever, but it's not. In reality, death is the single most tranquil and enjoyable thing ever, the only bad thing about death is that to kill someone you must damage them until their life is extinguished which usually is excruciatingly painful. However, abortion isn't painful as, BABIES, don't unlock [conciscnouss skill] until age level 4 so fetuses will not feel it at all. So what you are saying is that you would rather have a helpless baby suffer than let said baby experience the greatest form of tranquility and happiness. Also I'm not suicidal and yes I know I sound like I am, and to the people who are, know even if no one else loves you, I do.
Of course Rock wasn't his real name, but a nickname given to him by the people working in the construction site with him as he didn't like to talk that much. Rock didn't have a real name from his parents, he was an orphan, and he grew up in a house complex owned by the government for orphaned children. The government sends food to those houses once a week but it wasn't enough for the kids there to feed themselves. The orphanages were all full and that's why the government created these houses and sent food to the children but a lot of them still died due to hunger or illnesses as there was no one to take care of them even when they were ill. Rock stayed there until he was 12. He could fight the other children for the food, but even then it was not enough to feed himself so he decided to leave.
Monarch of Time
Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian
Nope it was a great terror that sunny fought as a saint
So, a Nightmare Creature with five Soul Cores of the Awakened Rank would be called an Awakened Tyrant, while one with four Soul Cores of the Fallen Rank would be called a Fallen Devil.
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
I get you, idk about you but for me the thought of re-writing or editing a chapter genuinely hurts my brain, so I can see how difficult it is to re-write a chapter.
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Shadow Slave: Diaries of a Stranger in even Stranger Lands
Book&Literature · John_Doe_777
The almighty Insomniac one!
'Paradise in Red, Sleepless, Snowmobile and Thorai. Do any of those names ring a bell for you, Fire?'
The Noble Queen-A Shadow Slave Fanfic
Book&Literature · NobleQueenBee
Ninjago sunny
The third gentleman, Snowmobile, was the most enigmatic of the three. His face was covered by a horned mask that reminded the Queen of a certain duelist she would rather not think about just now.
The Noble Queen-A Shadow Slave Fanfic
Book&Literature · NobleQueenBee
The insomniac one, Sleepless, leader of the DawnBreak.
'Paradise in Red, Sleepless, Snowmobile and Thorai. Do any of those names ring a bell for you, Fire?'
The Noble Queen-A Shadow Slave Fanfic
Book&Literature · NobleQueenBee
"only one thing is clear.....only you are truly free to make your own fate." ---> "only one thing is clear... only you are truly free to make your own fate." More than 3 dots in an ellipsis is improper grammar and can tick off readers and even cause them to drop the book, there should also be a space after the ellipsis as a lack of space is also improper grammar. Hope the constructive criticism is helpful!
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Shadow Slave: Diaries of a Stranger in even Stranger Lands
Book&Literature · John_Doe_777
Everyone yapping about, "B-b-but It's an Undead!" or "W-w-what if it's just weak!" y'all, to put it bluntly, are dumb. Explain to me how a creature of higher rank and core can be so easily slaughtered by a human, and mind you, humans are already weak compared to beasts and nightmare creatures, that is not even dormant or seems to have a powerful weapon.
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Shadow Slave: Diaries of a Stranger in even Stranger Lands
Book&Literature · John_Doe_777
Man steal ovary*
"Whatever. Just fix up my Kirby and don't mess things up. Larkinson or not, I'll string you by the balls if you cost me my revenge."
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
The point is that Men are the masters of Mechs, and no matter what they can do we still are the ones who gave them that capability and the ones who command them as we see right thus you are wrong as well as incredibly dumb, and yes, it genuinely hurt to read this chain of comments.
Ves naturally refused to adopt such a servile philosophy. He believed that men were masters over the machine. No matter how sophisticated the mech, it's still created as a vehicle for a pilot to protect or destroy. Naturally, with his recent studies of the X-Factor, his views had adjusted slightly, but only in the sense that mechs performed best when they were created as similar-minded partners to their pilots. There was no need to go overboard and act as if humans were the slaves in this relationship.
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
they the same thing bc whatever their leaking is kinda like their life blood, the way blood is for us, the mech blood probably isn't as important for them as our blood is for us tho.
TheSeventhSnake had already decoupled and tossed aside his slagged rifle. With his twin heated knives he struck the damaged and bleeding mech in its head and upper torso. He landed with so much momentum behind him that the knives tore through the remnants of the heavy mech's armor and ruined several of its critical systems, the most important of which was the power reactor embedded near the heart area.
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
X-factor again
"Death!" TheSeventhSnake yelled as he exerted his Seraphim to the utmost, managing to slowly close the distance at the cost of overheating his mech's wings. "I can take it! My mech is meant to rule the skies!"
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
This is X-factor
That was okay, because Snake increased his speed and approached with fury. His heart pumped faster and his brain went into a heightened state. His Seraphim holstered the rifle on his back, which was difficult with the wings in the way, and retrieved a pair of heated knives. Like the fangs of a predator, he wielded them in a reserve grip and rocketed in a charging attack towards the enemy flier.
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
Who's name is mat
Ves smiled ruefully when he heard those words. "The bigwigs probably aren't interested in a small businessman like me. I'm not one of those geniuses with fancy degrees from Mars or Estelon."
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
He's both... He's a black person
"You asshole! Are you a monkey or a man? Stand still for a moment!"
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
If anyone didn't understand I meant that the author was saying one and then zero well progressively getting higher, shown as he says zebro instead of zero and Uuno instead of uno, the fact that he's speaking in Spanish also shows he's off crack cuz war is german(according to his profile) and then at the end he says yuh, admitting that yes, he did take some crack
It was amazing.
Kill the Sun
Fantasy · Warmaisach
This dude can't spell for the life of him so I will translate it for y'all: "Our MC only cares for what he wants to care for, or what concerns him, such as becoming powerful so that nothing can hurt him and his loved ones, which is his goal in his life. To become strong he needs nutrition and nutrition comes from food, thus why should he give his food to others and keep himself from achieving his goal? He's not a goody two shoes or a bad person, he simply is HIM"
'I hunted this game! This meat is mine, MINE! They will only be allowed to eat my scraps when and if I want so!'
Supreme Magus
Fantasy · Legion20