OMG. A NEW STORY FROM JIROCHU_??? IM PRESENTTTT! ANYWAYS-- The story is very great, definitely a RECOMMEND![img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Loving it]
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A NEW STORY FROM JIROCHU_??? IM' HERE FOR ITTTT!!!! [img=update][img=update]
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CHANGING MY REVIEW.Since you've did some proofreading, and some improvements... THE IMPROVEMENTS ARE WILD. THE SCENES ARE SO VIVIDDDDD [img=Feeling it]KEEP UP I'LL BE VOTING AND WAITING FOR NEW CHAPTERS [img=Loving it]
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ain't no way they just left us with a cliffhanger 😐
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THIS ONE IS DEFINITELY A RECOMMEND! I love how the way you describe these characters, really! And their emotions, the scenes, just everything. 🤯 Though, I think you should always refine your story to make it even more better. I'll be supporting your story, It reminds me of that one popular novel (not trying to compare yours btw) I'm looking forward on the future characters, arcs and chapters, Goodluck Author!! 😚
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it's sad to know that ur first book wouldn't be your main focus for now tho i respect ur decision cus this book is pretty awesome and you've improved, author-nim!!
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