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yes its my first time I am still learning, in upcoming chapters you will definitely see improvement ๐คฉ
Henry was inside the house while Asher rushed towards it. When he saw the rock fall on the dining table, Asher fell to the ground, tears streaming down his face. It felt like the end of the world for him. He shouted Henry's name and quickly entered the house through the window of his room. He felt his heart break as he slowly approached the fallen rock. And what did he see? Henry was safe; the rock hadn't hit him, but it had crushed his left hand. Asher, relieved to see Henry alive, felt a surge of hope. But the next challenge was to free Henry's trapped hand from under the rock. He hurriedly moved towards Henry and sat down, talking to him while Henry was barely conscious.
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Fantasy ยท 0272919
thank you for such an honest review ๐
really! they are just so good mine are not even near to them
Henry was inside the house while Asher rushed towards it. When he saw the rock fall on the dining table, Asher fell to the ground, tears streaming down his face. It felt like the end of the world for him. He shouted Henry's name and quickly entered the house through the window of his room. He felt his heart break as he slowly approached the fallen rock. And what did he see? Henry was safe; the rock hadn't hit him, but it had crushed his left hand. Asher, relieved to see Henry alive, felt a surge of hope. But the next challenge was to free Henry's trapped hand from under the rock. He hurriedly moved towards Henry and sat down, talking to him while Henry was barely conscious.
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Fantasy ยท 0272919
you got discord account lets talk there bro
Bro your idea of story is very good, I like the names of characters as well as your writing atyle, I am also adding your book into mh collection I love your concept and while reading your wording force reader to visualize, keep going bro
ch 0 3 Part 3: Outcast And The Shadow Deity
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Your English is far better than mine also English is not my first language
Thank you, some more suggestions so that I can enhance it, it's my first novel.
Bro the start is so awesome, and as you narrated them I can feel all the happenings and your words were forcing me to visualize the scene, welcome bro I have just read ch 1 and I love it ๐๐
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