BlueJeans

1mth

Commented

Truck-kun always making trouble

The truck had hit Manav, who was running on the road.

Thrown in the Diesel Punk World

Sci-fi · PUNK_WRITER

BlueJeans

1mth

Commented

I like the writing. It's easy to understand and follow.

ch 0 1 Chapter 1: The Call Of The Forest

Defective Mage: Bloodline Of An Ancient Race

Fantasy · Franklin_Nwakamma

BlueJeans

1mth

Commented

I feel like we have some similarities in taste on what we like to enjoy reading.

ch 0 -2 About The Author Pt. 2

The Prince's Villainous Flower [BL]

History · _Haven

BlueJeans

1mth

Commented

I feel the same here.

Maybe. But it's a chore for me to read straight romance between lovers as well as it is to write it. And I'm also inexperienced when it comes to that type of love. Truthfully, platonic friendships are much more fulfilling to me where I am in life right now. I've never had a lover before, so I can't say I know what I'm missing, but perhaps that's why I don't crave for it. And if a love like that isn't something I desire, I won't write poems about it.

The Prince's Villainous Flower [BL]

History · _Haven

BlueJeans

1mth

Commented

the info dump is well written and easy to read.

ch 0 1 Chapter 1: The Fall of the Wall

The Apocalypse Behind the Wall

Eastern · zeroven

BlueJeans

1mth

Commented

This is interesting

There, all countries became one, which was named the World Government. Their plan was to defend against the dinosaurs, and try to find out why did this happen. The thing they were most curious about was: For many years NASA was in space, how were they not able to find out that Earth was actually larger?

The Apocalypse Behind the Wall

Eastern · zeroven

BlueJeans

1mth

Commented

what kind of beast would appear?

A large part of Antarctica suddenly collapsed, causing world-wide flooding. And to add to destruction, the extinct beasts from the ancient times reappeared, along with other unknown creatures.

The Apocalypse Behind the Wall

Eastern · zeroven

BlueJeans

1mth

Posted

The novel is good but it need more improvement on its writing. Detailed description is good. But it could distract reader attention on more crucial scenes. In some of the chapter, I easily distracted because how detailed the description of some scenes. It makes me forget what's going on. I'm not quite to sure with the timeline. It makes me wonder if some scenes were fake and some scenes were actual reality.There's no problem with the story. But for me the reading experience is needed to improve. Like avoiding to used detailed description on every scenes and focused on scenes that needed to be describe with more detail.Overall I'll still recommend reader to give this a try.

Agent M: The Rise of Miro

Sci-fi · _Co

BlueJeans

1mth

Commented

I thought he's going to go with Miles.

ch 0 5 Coffee

Agent M: The Rise of Miro

Sci-fi · _Co

BlueJeans

1mth

Commented

This part is quite difficult to follow. Some of the description of scenes is difficult to follow. especially for non-native English.

ch 0 4 Coordinates

Agent M: The Rise of Miro

Sci-fi · _Co

BlueJeans

1mth

Commented

Who's she in the last?Seem not just an average cast.

ch 0 3 Grandma

Agent M: The Rise of Miro

Sci-fi · _Co

BlueJeans

1mth

Commented

This thing is making me confused. Just what happened. I can't even tell which is reality and which is not.

In that moment, Miro felt a strange sensation. His surroundings blurred, and when he opened his eyes, he found himself back at his desk, lost in thought. The remnants of the glow lingered on his hand, leaving him contemplating the mysterious connection with the old lady.

Agent M: The Rise of Miro

Sci-fi · _Co

BlueJeans

1mth

Commented

The interaction between Miro and Lisa is nice. The teasing part is funny. They was like a bestie or partner-in crime.

ch 0 2 Mission

Agent M: The Rise of Miro

Sci-fi · _Co

BlueJeans

1mth

Commented

Is this a time skip perhaps?

"Understood, Director. What's the extraction plan for Miles?" Miro had been in the industry long enough not to let his emotions cloud his mission.

Agent M: The Rise of Miro

Sci-fi · _Co

BlueJeans

1mth

Commented

I think description like this could ve been simplyfied.

The sleek shuttle, nestled in a concealed spot beneath the library, emanated an air of covert sophistication. Its exterior, a seamless blend of matte black and midnight blue, was designed to merge with the underground world's shadows seamlessly. The surface, made of cutting-edge composite materials, hinted at the advanced technology concealed within. Tinted windows, revealing nothing of the clandestine activities within, added an extra layer of secrecy to its appearance. The absence of any discernible markings or logos ensured that its origins remained discreet.

Agent M: The Rise of Miro

Sci-fi · _Co

BlueJeans

1mth

Commented

I'm a little confused in some part of the scenes.

ch 0 1 System

Agent M: The Rise of Miro

Sci-fi · _Co

BlueJeans

1mth

Commented

You should at least try to run. Don't wait the truck and hug it.

"Damn it," he muttered under his breath, bracing himself for impact.

Agent M: The Rise of Miro

Sci-fi · _Co

BlueJeans

1mth

Commented

Does the Helicopter just crushed on them?

"I've got you, Miles," Miro's voice was filled with warmth and love as he looked at Miles, who was like a Father to him. But in an instant, the safety of their moment shattered. The steady hum of the helicopter turned into a chaotic screech, blurring everything outside the window into a whirlwind of colors.

Agent M: The Rise of Miro

Sci-fi · _Co

BlueJeans

1mth

Commented

I really like this type of game. I played many like Civ series, Rise of Nations and more.

"Kingdoms vs. Empire" starts players off as mere villagers, tasking them with evolving their settlements through various stages: from village to town, then city, and ultimately, to a kingdom. To ascend to the status of an empire, a player must conquer at least three kingdoms, compelling the defeated to pledge allegiance under their empire's flag. This hierarchical structure positioned empires as formidable forces, commanding resources and loyalty from the subjugated kingdoms.