Is t it Hidden Forest? Forest Hidden doesn’t make sense as a name
"The dungeon mattered because Forest Hidden needs another facility," Elisebeth said.
Harem Online: My Party Is Full of Beautiful Celebrities
Games · MysteriousCat
What do you mean working towards? He already has that class- he got it when he mastered three weapons- proofread your AI better
Martin leaned back in his chair. "I'm still working toward Warden, and I already had to start carrying different weapons because normal Guardian equipment no longer covers everything I'm trying to do. You two changed the way your classes work in one day. Your old builds aren't going to catch up by themselves."
Harem Online: My Party Is Full of Beautiful Celebrities
Games · MysteriousCat
You mean Kumoe’s leg- the torn tendon debuff didn’t happen to Alex
Is it three tails or one? It has never been consistent. Please proof better
Behind the bickering, her three tails swept happily through the rain.
Harem Online: My Party Is Full of Beautiful Celebrities
Games · MysteriousCat
Warden isn’t waiting- he already changed into it
NukEncore stared at her. "Martin has Warden waiting, you already have Packblade, and I get homework?"
Harem Online: My Party Is Full of Beautiful Celebrities
Games · MysteriousCat
How would he know she even started a class change quest? No communication happened about it and it only triggered during the Beastslayer fight. Please proofread and edit better
Martin turned toward her. "You finished the quest?"
Harem Online: My Party Is Full of Beautiful Celebrities
Games · MysteriousCat
High potential in idea and world building g, but the authors reliance on AI and lack of proofreading before posting really causes a gradual loss of character- things become rote and major plot points are retconned chapter to chapter- makese wish I had never read it
Since when can he manipulate Earth- now the AI has done gone jumped the shark. Hate to see it when it finally get exposed
Cedric raised an earth wall across the main avenue as soon as the whistle sounded, cutting the ruins into two narrow approaches.
I Stopped Simping and the Heroines Lost Their Minds
Fantasy · evilUchiha
What the hell is this barrier stuff? Did Cedric get a power set different from his tank nature?
Cedric received a different task. Rather than surrounding the group with barriers, he would block selected corridors and interrupt Elara's sightlines.
I Stopped Simping and the Heroines Lost Their Minds
Fantasy · evilUchiha
Kallan isn’t a Specialist- proofread better
Heroine Creation: All My Summons Are Custom Made
Fantasy · Steelromerc