starting to write back today
ch 25 Clash of brothers (edited: I read it over and didn't enjoy it so i rewrite it, hope you enjoy this one better)
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yes figure that out thanks. I'm still new to the game of thrones I'm trying my best, so please feel free to tell me any mistake I've made
The Maid beamed with a smile and replied, "Will do, Mrs. Phoenix!" With that, I was in good hands again, and the Maid carried me away, leaving my mother behind.
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yes, 馃槀 the Targaryens name are so similar forgot how to spell them.
Ragnar could then feel his mother's hands hitting him on his head as he turned to look at her in surprise. His mother lady Ashara was kneeling before Prince Aegon and his company. Ragnar quickly realized that he had spaced out, lost in his thoughts. Feeling embarrassed, Ragnar swiftly proceeded to kneel beside his mother.
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made a mistake there
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sorry made a mistake there
ch 0 4 chapter 3
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oh sorry I meant house Tyrell
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i explained it in the chapter that said house phoenix. So don't be angry I did my research before i took the lands of the reach, and i still made the reach big enough to be one of the major kingdoms
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i undertstand your reasoning, but I didn't just cut off 1/3 of the reach for no reason. i did my research and found out house Martel wasn't the first ruler of the reach but was given to them by aegon the conqueror after killing the house that controled the reach, then place house Martel as the warden of the reach. So afterall that research I did i decided after house phoenix was the one who help aegon the most, he gave house Phoenix vast lands encompassing some of the reach which extended into the Storm lands.
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just posted the map so you can check it out if you want
ch 0 1 House Phoenix.
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sorry if it's not showing well had to compress the image. if your using phone flip it upsided down and if your using PC turn the image upside down
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image is too large to upload 馃槶
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I'll try to make it
ch 0 1 House Phoenix.
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LoL馃ぃ馃ぃ馃ぃ
latest chapter redo. so if you read it before redo, you can check it out again make some changes because i didn't like how it sounded
He then soon continueed to search for an exit and found a stairway leading up to a closed door. Clapping his hands together, he exclaimed, "Aha! I guess that's the exit." Advancing toward the door, his white hair billowing in the wind.
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latest chapter redo check it out, I didn't like how it sound so I change it hope you like the changes
ch 21 Michael vs hellhound
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I redid the chapter, iIread it over and didn't like how it sounded so i change it a bit to be more interesting. you can check it out and i hope you enjoy it better
Also Sorry for the delay, you guys know I won't post a chapter if it isn't atleast a 1000+ words, and as I said I'm really busy so I don't got that much Time do I hope you can see with me, aIso I won't be dropping any of my fanfic so you don't have to worry about that.
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I redid the chapter, iIread it over and didn't like how it sounded so i change it a bit to be more interesting. you can check it out and i hope you enjoy it better
ch 25 Clash of brothers (edited: I read it over and didn't enjoy it so i rewrite it, hope you enjoy this one better)
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I redid the chapter, iIread it over and didn't like how it sounded so i change it a bit to be more interesting. you can check it out and i hope you enjoy it better
ch 25 Clash of brothers (edited: I read it over and didn't enjoy it so i rewrite it, hope you enjoy this one better)
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I redid the chapter, iIread it over and didn't like how it sounded so i change it a bit to be more interesting. you can check it out and i hope you enjoy it better
ch 25 Clash of brothers (edited: I read it over and didn't enjoy it so i rewrite it, hope you enjoy this one better)
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if you read nano machine you would no nothing that cripple the mc only if you kill him
Nano Machine: The 8th Young Master
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