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The twist 馃槀
However, just as they stepped outside, one of the kids raised his hand and pointed to the right, towards the sea. "Look, what is that? Master Alvan. Is it one of those celestial alignments that normally disrupt the atmospheric phenomenon?"
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I can only drop one comment... You are atalented writer. But the update is not encouraging
ch 37 37: The Stakes Of The Sword Duel
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Can't wait for the next one. You are killing us with these cliffhangers 馃ゲ
ch 38 39: The Showdown: Evelyn Vs Zoya
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This novel is just so great, I just think it is underated
"A dragon whip!" Evelyn exclaimed as she extended her hand to grab it. Just as her hand touched the handle of the whip, she felt a pulse in her body. Her amulet also stopped vibrating.
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Right now, he was just a few seconds away from accomplishing his mission here.
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Great. You should write more of a fast-paced fighting scenes in the future... Also some descriptions are not that vivid too
ch 21 21: Three Against One
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He is certainly up to something
This left the others confused, including Wilson, who had conjured a shield of lightning in front of him. Why did Steve intervene to stop the attack intended for Wilson? Whose side was he on?
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I just love how Steve used his shadow here.
The lightning field, which was about three meters wide, was spreading towards the other two with Zoya at the epicenter. Another earth wall rose up between Wilson and Zoya, interrupting the lightning discharge.
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De_prodigy you should have told us that earth is the best counter for lightning element...
The lightning field, which was about three meters wide, was spreading towards the other two with Zoya at the epicenter. Another earth wall rose up between Wilson and Zoya, interrupting the lightning discharge.
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Wrong move Zoya! You forgot that ice or water are the best conductor of lightning currents... Where was your brain, Zoya girl 馃槀
Zoya had made a mistake, which she realized as the lightning coursed through the frosty ground towards her. She tried to disconnect the ice on the floor from her body, but it was already too late.
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Here again is Zoya being protective of Evelyn... Please @De_prodigy you need to clarify these things. Zoya isn't yet Evelyn's friend, so why risk to protect her. Who is even trying to protect Elvis? 馃槀馃ゲ
She lifted her head and saw Steve and another unfamiliar guy standing in front of Evelyn and Elvis. Upon seeing Steve, she became even more furious. However, she noticed that his shadow dome was protecting her roommate. Zoya's anger towards Steve was pacified.
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So Steve is protecting Evelyn just because of what happened at the library... I think there is more to it... Did he fall for her? 馃槀
Steve scoffed when he heard what Wilson asked. He knew his place well; he could not challenge someone so strong. But he was willing to protect Evelyn. He turned his head and looked at Evelyn, sighing as he remembered what he had almost done to her in the library.
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Who even asked Troy to protect Evelyn...
'I'm sure she is the one. I won't let this bully bastard harm her," Troy thought.
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You really got me here, author. I don't know what to say, so I will wait for the next chapter
ch 13 13: Who Exactly Is That Man?
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Oh, the amulet given to Werney by Queen Hunith...
Then, as she lifted her head, her eyes landed on a similar amulet worn by the new teacher. It was identical in shape and size to hers, except that his amulet was colourless and sparkled like a diamond.
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What a showdown of powers? I just love this chapter
ch 12 12: The Clash: Flames Vs Frosts
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I'm adding it right away to my library...
ch 0 1 01: The Encroaching Plague
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