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Every time she is one up she is ten down. Better to act like an idiot then and leave Kate to look after him. She could just move out. It's better to deal with a demon than her idiot husband.

issue 126004

Oh for Pete's sake. Is she ever going to say anything constructive!

Excellent!

The story is still ok but seems to run around in circles with nothing beneficial to the lead female. She came back with no plan forward except to deal with matters of the family instead of dealing with enemies. It stretches a little but the story is good. Aside from her grudges I would have liked to see her making a lot more positive changes.

Why are these chapters so expensive.

I like the story. The use of language and translation are better than most books I read. I think this is going to be a real entertaining read!

These chapters are miserably short. Good story but very short chapters.

Pity. Why did you suddenly start asking 2 FP for a chapter.

I love this story. I keep waiting for the ball to drop on that 1 month deadline. I can't wait!

You don't have to keep repeating the message at the end of every chapter. Use the space for writing. You write well.

Brilliant plot! Excellently written! Can't wait for all the action to develop between the two leads.

This is a good read. Please continue.

I am a huge fan of your writing. A whole lot of Awesomeness!