little_black_horse

little_black_horse

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Loves writing dark fantasy, thriller, and system genres. For discussions, ideas, or collaborations — connect with me: IG: @blackhorse.ink DC: littleblackhorse “Where darkness meets the page.”

2023-06-21 Joined Global
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little_black_horse
little_black_horse
25 days ago
Replied to Berry_Jay_6746

okay, i will check it.

little_black_horse
little_black_horse
2 months ago
Replied to KutubEzekiel1

Not really.

little_black_horse
little_black_horse
4 months ago
Replied to Lizzie_Toons

Thanks. I will check it.

little_black_horse
little_black_horse
4 months ago
Replied to Alexis3293

Thanks, you can follow me on my IG: littleblackhorse. See you soon

little_black_horse
little_black_horse
7 months ago
Posted

The plot is quite interesting. I like it. However, the punctuation could be improved, and the pace could be slowed down so that readers can get a feel for the story. The character descriptions could also be deepened so that readers can care about the characters. Keep up the good work updating the story and don't stop!

little_black_horse
little_black_horse
8 months ago
Replied to Lucinda_Hacker

yeah, another typo again. But thanks anyway, it means a lot to me

little_black_horse
little_black_horse
8 months ago
Replied to Lucinda_Hacker

thanks

little_black_horse
little_black_horse
8 months ago
Replied to Lucinda_Hacker

yeah, you're right. thanks

little_black_horse
little_black_horse
8 months ago
Replied to Lucinda_Hacker

Oh, okay. Thanks i will fix it.

little_black_horse
little_black_horse
8 months ago
Posted

The story is very interesting and quite appealing to me. It combines elements of fantasy, cuisine, and isekai, which is unique. The character introductions are also quite good, and I only found a few punctuation errors. Keep up the good work author.

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