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Okay, i get it. Thanks
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oh yes, Chronos. Thanks by the way. I appreciate it!
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Quest 5: Give for the best friend ( it's just a small task ) (finish on chapter 10)
"Quest 6: The Persea's power (required)"
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Thanks a lot!
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ch 68 Chapter 68: Descendant curse
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okay, thanks
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Okay, i get it.
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Thanks a lot
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Thanks a lot, i will try. Thanks
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very not verrry
"Ain't you seeing Lala today?" Jimin asked. He's the youngest among us and the only rockstar that bears his korean name. He looks girlish and verrry shy.
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this dialogue it's too long for me, maybe you can split it or add dialogue tags
He began, "You know already details about the show. It's not just the song but the dancing too and I know no band can match with both your songs and your dancing which means that we are definitely gonna be the best performed. As you know, the show is next week saturday by 7pm but they have your stage performance time dated by 9pm after two bands we are third. Mr Brown and Mr Jay will have a meeting with you tomorrow by 4pm and you know what that means. After the meeting tomorrow with the two men, we'll know what next to discuss about." He stood up.
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"Okay, that's good." Sir santos nodded.
Sir Santos nodded.
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Romeo rolled his eyes, showing his annoyance." Okay, fine. I promise."
I saw Romeo roll his eyes.
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I think this dialogue is too long for me. maybe you can add a dialogue tag to make this dialogue alive.
"Romeo the mass are making very bad remarks about Rocks high and the rockstars which might affect the industries alot. The duet competition is drawing near and we must grab the target just like we did last year. You'll have to promise for the second and the last time, not to sign for a student to be beaten or harrased in anyway again. Do that now please," sir santos said.
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He refers to who? Sir Santos?
He looked back at Romeo.
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Thank you very much!
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