Not really.
Thanks. I will check it.
Thanks, you can follow me on my IG: littleblackhorse. See you soon
The plot is quite interesting. I like it. However, the punctuation could be improved, and the pace could be slowed down so that readers can get a feel for the story. The character descriptions could also be deepened so that readers can care about the characters. Keep up the good work updating the story and don't stop!
yeah, another typo again. But thanks anyway, it means a lot to me
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thanks
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yeah, you're right. thanks
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Oh, okay. Thanks i will fix it.
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The story is very interesting and quite appealing to me. It combines elements of fantasy, cuisine, and isekai, which is unique. The character introductions are also quite good, and I only found a few punctuation errors. Keep up the good work author.
okay, i will check it.
Master Of Astral Summoner
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