Timo_Tomo_Solgaleo - Profile

Wtf okay the writing is the most awkward thing I’ve read in like a year. When he wakes up he just goes and tells hela secrets to Odin wtf completley unesesary and the relationship between him and people is strained AF. Wonder Woman becomes MC’s girlfriend the day after meeting him wtf. Okay then he goes hunt for reincarnators because why not do free work. For some reason all reincarnators other than him are killers, r*pists and what not end up killing all of them. Dunno overall this story was executed on the worst way possible I think a 7 year old could have written this

Also forgot to mention the thaumolgy/magic theory here is so not the one FATE follows like some random ass kid suddenly got fire magic without any connection to the gods??????? Then author decided to make magic evil like from the devil????? In the age of gods humans only survived because the gods blessed their priests with magic and send their demigod kids to defend against phatasmal beasts so I find that approach to magic very dumb.

Bellow average story but that’s okay with me this is only to pass time. What did Rick me off hard is the lack of information the author has like he doesn’t know basic info about gods/divine spirits, authority, mystery, and the reverse side of the world but yet he decided to write a FATE fanfic in ancient Mesopotamia about just that.

Actually deserves to be in rankings surprised that it isn’t.