Solid first chapter. Better not drop it like the last one. Interested to see where this story goes.
ch 0 1 The 5 Primordial Laws
Fantasy · FWK
When it was all done and over, our side gained a minor victory. Even though they were outnumbered by 30, Chief Tyu alone broke through their forces. We suffered only 15 casualties because of him, while the opposition lost 45. Although we made the numbers tighter, we lost a valuable warrior. Chief Tyu, sacrificed his life so that his men could escape, and live on to protect the tribe.
Fantasy · FWK
"I'm sorry, but your Father… died in combat protecting my life from an ambush that the tribe across the river had laid for us. I know it might be hard to accept, but he died knowing his sacrifice will lead to a better future. We won't lose against the tribe across the river, and we'll bring about peace again. You have to believe me." Chief Tyu tried to console Shakkar, Rei, and me.
Fantasy · FWK
Unfortunately, that wasn't the case. Monica woke up 3 hours later and didn't know what to say. Apparently, she forgot that it was her turn to train me, and for some reason, I got punished for it. She lifted me into the air and crushed me between her arms and chest. If this is what she considers a 'hug', then I feel sorry for the poor sucker who's gonna have to deal with this for the rest of his life.
Fantasy · FWK
Rip Zakkar you soft hearted gorilla
"I'm sorry, but your Father… died in combat protecting my life from an ambush that the tribe across the river had laid for us. I know it might be hard to accept, but he died knowing his sacrifice will lead to a better future. We won't lose against the tribe across the river, and we'll bring about peace again. You have to believe me." Chief Tyu tried to console Shakkar, Rei, and me.
Fantasy · FWK
Rip you legend, Chief Tyu
When it was all done and over, our side gained a minor victory. Even though they were outnumbered by 30, Chief Tyu alone broke through their forces. We suffered only 15 casualties because of him, while the opposition lost 45. Although we made the numbers tighter, we lost a valuable warrior. Chief Tyu, sacrificed his life so that his men could escape, and live on to protect the tribe.
Fantasy · FWK
Rip to another legend.
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Fantasy · FWK
Rip Zakkar you soft hearted gorilla.
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Fantasy · FWK
Is this a garou reference?
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Fantasy · FWK
This chef seems like a real one so far. Wondering where the story is going to go and what’s up with the book. Also not sure how advanced the technology is in this place. Hopefully the next chapter releases soon.
ch 0 2 Joy Over Sorrow
The Novel’s Anomaly
Fantasy · FWK