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ch 18 Chapter 18: Return After Disappearance (Part 2)

Training My Beautiful Mother

Training My Beautiful Mother

Urban · BukkakeMaster

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but why can't she get it by herself??

Though the former needed to be bribed for it, she didn't like public attention, and the best way to bribe Nyx was to give her some ice cream to eat.

The Psychopath's Harem

The Psychopath's Harem

Fantasy · SKuLL

DikMaster
Replied to Alfae

You fail to provide any evidence that the prose is akin academic writing. Just saying so only means that you have difficulty understanding those parts which impeded in your enjoyment. I have indeed jumped logic in my previous comment and deduced that your difficulty in understanding stems from lack of vocabulary. Otherwise, I don't get what the problem is. It's a perfectly fine third person narration.

Firstly, the capacity to magnify a corresponding fate tributary, thereby setting in stone an imminent destiny for the target. This process could be expeditious, yet its future influence spanned a mere ten seconds. The resulting efficacy was contingent upon environmental compatibility; a more congruent backdrop augmented the probability of the event materializing in the forthcoming future.

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

DikMaster
Replied to Alfae

Except it *is* simple. No, your lack of vocabulary doesn't imply "academic phrasing".

Firstly, the capacity to magnify a corresponding fate tributary, thereby setting in stone an imminent destiny for the target. This process could be expeditious, yet its future influence spanned a mere ten seconds. The resulting efficacy was contingent upon environmental compatibility; a more congruent backdrop augmented the probability of the event materializing in the forthcoming future.

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

DikMaster
Replied to Li_Human

Except they are not *bombastic* words at all. It is standard English. Please state any *bombastic* words or phrases you think were used. And well, fiction do need some *bombastic*-ness. (But again no *bombastic*-ness from TL side was present in the chapter.) I only came to know that there was some problem with the chapter after reading the comments. And I believe I am not alone.Maybe the TL should consider the demographics of readers and lower the bar of vocabulary but idk.

Firstly, the capacity to magnify a corresponding fate tributary, thereby setting in stone an imminent destiny for the target. This process could be expeditious, yet its future influence spanned a mere ten seconds. The resulting efficacy was contingent upon environmental compatibility; a more congruent backdrop augmented the probability of the event materializing in the forthcoming future.

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

DikMaster
Replied to Sk1lz3r

But it's all standard English. What exactly do you not understand?

Firstly, the capacity to magnify a corresponding fate tributary, thereby setting in stone an imminent destiny for the target. This process could be expeditious, yet its future influence spanned a mere ten seconds. The resulting efficacy was contingent upon environmental compatibility; a more congruent backdrop augmented the probability of the event materializing in the forthcoming future.

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

DikMaster
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bruh, you made me read oedipus complex on wikipedia

It really makes you wonder as to how did Damien not have developed an Oedipus complex yet, with how bangable his mother looks.

Fulfilling my Lustful Fantasies

Fulfilling my Lustful Fantasies

Fantasy · Fnatic_Fan

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yes, the second hand embarrassment just made me do a silent scream

He looked hesitant, but managed to squeeze the words out of his mouth. "I… When I see all the injustice of this world. All the unfairness. The evildoers that evade or, worse, hide behind the law and go not just unpunished, but rewarded for their crimes… I suppose a part of me wishes that there really will be a god who judges all equally and impart justice"

Fulfilling my Lustful Fantasies

Fulfilling my Lustful Fantasies

Fantasy · Fnatic_Fan

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