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thx ,ok

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not a fan of Ivelia becoming the female lead

Ivelia's cheeks turned a rosy shade of red and her ears also tinged with red due to this small gesture from him as she thought to herself while averting her gaze.

Extra And MC

Extra And MC

Fantasy · Caeruleum_

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remind me of a phrase "eyes as blue as the azure sky"

Turning my head, I saw a young woman with azure hair and eyes that were cold as ice.

Extra's Magic

Extra's Magic

Fantasy · Gurdon

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Wondering why your flowery words are excessive

The forest was shrouded in the hushed whispers of falling snowflakes, creating a serene blanket of white that concealed the secrets of the world beneath. Among the trees, a figure emerged, a girl with hair as brilliant as the clearest sky, a vivid azure that seemed to capture the essence of winter itself.

Extra's Magic

Extra's Magic

Fantasy · Gurdon

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this still got me laughing or confused why is it golden

Golden particles began to gather in my right hand as I channeled Mana into the skill.

Extra's Magic

Extra's Magic

Fantasy · Gurdon

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"burned"

I could see my flesh being licked by the intense flames, but the pain was quickly replaced by a surge of adrenaline.

Extra's Magic

Extra's Magic

Fantasy · Gurdon

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should use resounded

I slammed into the beast's side with a force that jolted through my body. My sword met its target, sinking into the Frostfire Tiger's fur with a satisfying impact. The clash of steel against fur reverberated in the air, the sound merging with the echoes of the explosions.

Extra's Magic

Extra's Magic

Fantasy · Gurdon

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I feel like the "veil" is overused

Suddenly, the blizzard around us seemed to disappear, as if we stepped through the veil of the storm into the Frostfire Tiger's lair.

Extra's Magic

Extra's Magic

Fantasy · Gurdon

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still wondering why it's color gold when his affinity is shadow

Golden particles began to swirl within my hand and manifested into a translucent, ethereal blade.

Extra's Magic

Extra's Magic

Fantasy · Gurdon

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Commented

the last sentence here has too much flowery words

Channeling Mana into my legs, I kicked up a cloud of snow underneath me, lunging forward like a comet streaking through the night sky.

Extra's Magic

Extra's Magic

Fantasy · Gurdon

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a Chinese manhua mc , where they will always kill those who offend them for little reason

The Hero wasn't known as a viciously merciless antihero for nothing. He was the type to kill anyone who had shown him hostility. Ackster, who had said he would kill The Hero by voluntarily challenging him to a death battle, had already signed his death sentence. Even if Ackster realized his mistake and forfeited, The Hero wouldn't let it go. It might take a while, a couple of days, weeks, or months, even. But Ackster would disappear one day.

Rogue Villain

Rogue Villain

Fantasy · armordillo

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a Chinese manhua mc

The Hero wasn't known as a viciously merciless antihero for nothing. He was the type to kill anyone who had shown him hostility. Ackster, who had said he would kill The Hero by voluntarily challenging him to a death battle, had already signed his death sentence. Even if Ackster realized his mistake and forfeited, The Hero wouldn't let it go. It might take a while, a couple of days, weeks, or months, even. But Ackster would disappear one day.

Rogue Villain

Rogue Villain

Fantasy · armordillo

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half elf so is he a half elf

Nevertheless, the most distinctive feature of her was her slightly long ears, revealing her identity as a half-elf. 

I Will Kill The Author

I Will Kill The Author

Fantasy · Night_Crawler619

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robocop

I placed my hand on my chest over my clothes and felt the hard surface of the red ruby that was now fused with me too.

I Will Kill The Author

I Will Kill The Author

Fantasy · Night_Crawler619

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