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ch 0 4 Darkness Unleashed In The Forest Of Death
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now that you point it out, I see it but I wasn't thinking that far ahead yet
The old man smiled warmly, placing a hand on Naruto's shoulder. "You're welcome, Naruto. You may have been dealt a difficult hand in life, but never forget that you are a ninja of the Leaf Village. And no matter what challenges may come your way, you will always have a home here."
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close, Anna MarieRogue
As Peter makes his way to his seat, he notices a new face among the familiar ones. Standing by the teacher's desk is a girl with striking white streaks in her hair, her eyes downcast and her posture tense. Intrigued, Peter watches as the teacher welcomes her to the class, introducing her as Rogue.
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good point. it'll be like old man steve rogers. he will grow old or use his chakra to rapidly age his body to die from "natural causes"
"Hmm, I see. Though I admit that at having those abilities in particular would aid me..., however it would also make it to where life wouldn't be a real challenge. With an immortal body I would be forced to watch as my loved one slowly wither away. And the only benefit I could see towards having a sharingan is having the ability to predict and steal techniques..., having the rest wouldn't give me a challenge."
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"Chi" is just another forum to chakra... it's just that Naruto's is more capable of pulling it out than most.
ch 0 1 The Death God's Offer. A New Lease On Life.
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with characters like galactus... it ain't that op, with one snap... this peter could be taken out just like the mcu spider-man... it ain't that op, with characters like black panther... it ain't that op. I'm not using it for much anyway 🤷
ch 0 2 Opening Untapped Potential. Chakra Controlled?
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thanks for the review, I do agree with keeping the harem small and as for the system I was thinking of making it a "progression system" or "dexterity system" where it shows the abilities that he chooses to master instead of a reward type of system. "you have maxed level on reading speed" or whatever.
ch 0 1 The Death God's Offer. A New Lease On Life.
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listening to it.... I understand where you are coming from. sounds jumbled and rushed, thanks for the review. hopefully the second chapter is more understandable. writing in Hope's to improve and give better details.
ch 0 1 Awakening
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please continue
ch 57 Utozard
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reading it a little bit I've seen a few auto-corrects, I've been use a "notes" app to take down my ideas .... finding out that copy and paste isn't allowed was... unpleasant. enough rambling. PLEASE REVIEW
ch 0 1 Awakening
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Please ... do read the synopsis and tags "Slice of Life"
ch 0 9 Carrying On & A Joyful Reunion
Marvel: Impact From The Maelstrom's Web
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