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It looks as if the MC knows what the author knows. I mean, he's inactive in the last few chapters in regards to finding Evelina. Clearly she's okay, but the MC reads the script, haha. The work is basically great, but I just noticed this non-obvious fact.

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I remember reading this before. Brings back good memories, I'm going to reread it. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]

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There aren't many chapters yet, but what we have is very good. Most of all I like the dialogues, and in the last chapter interesting about the soul described the author! [img=update] [img=update] [img=update]

A good, solid four. There is some work to be done here, but the world and characters are well revealed. I'll keep an eye on it. I'll keep an eye on it.