They do address her as ‘her’ in the next sentence, so it def was a typo… I hope
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Book&Literature · HornyFBI
I returned her embrace, a smile playing on my lips.
Anime & Comics · MilkywayAndromeda
I love the gaslighting 🤣
"No, I... Rika has been visiting my office frequently, claiming she preferred it over the cafeteria. She had also asked for a return on part of the class tax she had paid to me, saying she needed the money for personal expenses…" I trailed off, my voice quivering with false uncertainty. "I had no idea..."
Anime & Comics · MilkywayAndromeda
The realism of your writing really improves the quality of this fic. I think this was a good chapter, just enough darkness without going into cringe or unrealistic territory. Overall keep up the good work, liking this fanfic more then the L one tbh
Strategically, I'm sure Light would do something like this, but I don't know; felt a bit messed up writing this, considering the amount of thought I put into these scenarios; as you can imagine, it is kinda messed up detailing in your mind step by step how to fuck someone up like this in a realistic and functional manner. I actually try to put myself in the mind of whatever character I'm writing and also think about things from the lens of the opposing character too. Usually, dark stuff doesn't bother me at all, but maybe because of all that, and the focus on catching Kei's emotions I sympathized with her and it did this time. Or maybe I'm just being soft.
Anime & Comics · MilkywayAndromeda
It’s realistic considering that Ayanokoji wasn’t contributing to the class before he was forced to do so by chabs. Good chapter
I think some people may be upset class d and ayanokoji to a loss this quickly or easily but I think it's pretty realistic that this could happen in the original if someone had leaked the midterm exam.
Anime & Comics · MilkywayAndromeda
Emokoji
Not like a birthday matters, it's just the day I was born, and my fate was sealed, to be eternally being trapped inside the White Room.
Anime & Comics · Riku3055
Kinda like with yagami then?
"The more hate I felt, the more I felt my Potential being limitless, honestly..."
Anime & Comics · Riku3055
All hail Lelouch
Lelouch in COTE
Anime & Comics · avbutt
+1
Option 3: Hikigaya goes to Class A and creates a faction to rival Sakayanagi and Katsuragi.
Anime & Comics · avbutt
Pathetic
"Even if it's a competition, I still want to make fri-"
Anime & Comics · avbutt
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Anime & Comics · avbutt
Word Count (Don’t Read)
Anime & Comics · Great_Darkness
Yeah Chinese novels really make everything super extra for no reason.
"Yes, there is." Yukio casually took over the conversation, not letting Ichinose face Nagumo for him: "Nice to meet you, Nagumo. Actually, it's mainly because you leaned your head over."
Anime & Comics · Metarln
Everyone needs a friend like ishizaki
Ishizaki was the most straightforward, his eyes shining as he looked up to Yukio with admiration, thinking how deserving Yukio was of respect! If possible, he too wanted to step on the Vice President's head like Yukio did!
Anime & Comics · Metarln
I think so far it’s great, maybe it’s just personal bias but I think lights character fits better for a cote fanfic then L’s. Also since this isn’t a class d fanfic, it’s already more interesting then 99% of cote fics. I just wish the chapters were a bit longer
As promised the story is ramping up a bit now, let me know what you all think I can tell this story isn't as popular as the L one, which I kinda expected, but I just want to make sure there are a decent amount of people who enjoy the story.
Anime & Comics · MilkywayAndromeda
Communism
"We've discussed and most of the class has agreed to give Ichinose 70% of our private points, so we can manage our expenses."
Anime & Comics · avbutt
Peak chapter🤣
"Yes, Tachibana told me herself she is embezzling funds from the student council. Her purpose for doing so, I couldn't know, but she is your secretary after all so she must be an expert in handling the funds of the student council. No wonder it has gone unnoticed for so long."
Anime & Comics · MilkywayAndromeda
Ichinose is what you call a social terrorist. For any introvert she’s the bane of their existence
Ah, I forgot Ichinose was one of those girls. The nice girls. From her perspective, I was some poor loser who would have to go the next 3 years without any friends, so she wanted me to incorporate into the class. But, from my perspective, she was just some person trying to impose stupid ideals onto me.
Anime & Comics · avbutt
Nice story so far, definitely not the cliche Harry Potter fanfic. Author introduced nice OC’s and the MC is written well. Unlike most HP fic’s, the MC is generally a mentally stable guy who’s a little shameless when it comes to money but that only adds to his charm. Grammar is good too, hopefully there will be stable updates. If anything my only criticism would be that the pacing is a little slow (25 chapters in and it’s only beginning the first year). All in all though, great FF, looking forward to future updates
Hogwarts: I Really Am a Model Wizard
Movies · Zaelum