Thanks for the feedback, I revised chapter one with this in mind
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Fantasy · Poseidon1378
Thanks for the feedback
ch 0 7 The hunter becomes the hunted
Fantasy · Poseidon1378
See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
ch 175 You're Not Funny!
Fantasy · AnathaShesha
also I have really enjoyed reading the series and cannot wait for more!
I plan to have some later in the story, but I don't want to spoil the surprise.
The Saga of Valorian The Dread: The Savior of a Dying Race
Fantasy · Poseidon1378