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That's his secret to tell. Don't wanna be a snitch 馃ぃ But yeah, he's not!
"No! I'm not going to put that disgusting liquid on my body."
I Own a Succubus and a System
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Writing quality, dope! Update stability, well, it's still too early to judge but, so far, it's consistent. About the character design, not gonna lie, I read only chapter one so far and its hard to tell since it's a dream. But I think he'll be dope if he comes out to be like how he acted in this nightmare. Keep it up, author! I'll update this review according to how the story will grows.
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I actually liked the plot twist at the end. Keep it up!
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Such an intriguing first chapter and storyline! Keep it coming, author! Would like to read more of this book... and highly recommend it to anyone who's into dark things.
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Thank you!
ch 0 1 Unexpected Gift
Taming Venomous Beauties
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Because he's a snitch by blood馃ぃ
"Don't be angry with your sibling. He is wise and knows what you want."
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Yeah! She still doesn't trust him. When she does, you'll see how submissive she can become.
She gave him a strange look and replied, "The system is called satisfy me, don't you remember? I made it so I can be happy. That's why everything the host will do will be in line of satisfying my desires."
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Yeah! She was alive. However, not physical. She had lost her physical form so she could hide from the gods during the war. Plus, we still don't know if she loved God of Desires.
"Because of his powers and his inhuman lust, no human female ever survived his wrath on the bed. Getting selected meant death. These girls felt wronged. Because everything was poisonous after the war, their families would offer them him so he could give them a sapling and a handful of soil to plant it into.
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I also read it like that when I was editing. Btw, thanks for the vote!
'Whatever!'
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He will of course come back and do that.
"Of course no! You will be able to come back to complete quests like I do."
I Own a Succubus and a System
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Oh! Poor me! I thought it was something I needed to correct. I mean, I literally reread the whole chapter asking myself, where's it? 馃槀 Glad to hear it was just a comment for fun. Thank you!
"I'm not ready for that kind of penetration yet!"
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I don't understand. I mean, I'm not seeing where this is written so I can correct it.
"I'm not ready for that kind of penetration yet!"
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Thank you!
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She's of beauty, temptation to be exact. That's why I didn't see any problem in making her morally corrupt. Guess I would have to do some deep research about goddesses.
ch 14 [Bonus chapter]No Longer a Virgin Part Two [r18]
Taming Venomous Beauties
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Speechless!
His sudden moves on her butt forced her to curve her body, sticking the said butt in the air for his fingers to have access on her flower which was dripping with a delicious liquid only Byron had once took a sip on.
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馃槀
That day, they had been playing near the cliff when Gillian accidentally pushed him.
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Thank you so much! My keyboard just loves what whenever I try to write want. It gives me a headache when I'm editing.
"See," the Goddess of Beauty was excited. "You what this so let me help you!"
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I used outburst to mean 'a sudden release of strong emotion.'
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You can see from the dude and his mom's reactions that it was unusual for him to be called Kyron. He was used to being called Byron ever since they swapped their names. The Patriach also clearly says it's going to return to Kyron and call him by that to stress it. I don't see any issue here!
"From now onward, your name is going to return to Kyron. Byron is he who can save our people. He's done it."
Taming Venomous Beauties
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That's his secret to tell. Don't wanna be a snitch 馃槀 But yeah! He's not!
"No! I'm not going to put that disgusting liquid on my body."
I Own a Succubus and a System
Fantasy 路 ErioMillionz