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5mth

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i love their reaction

ch 72 Chapter 72: Dragon Kingdom Unleashed: An Epic Battle Unfolds with Unprecedented Forces and Unseen Powers!

Sailing: The Kingdom Of God I Created Has Been Exposed!

Anime & Comics · Alex081904

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6mth

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I still haven't read this but the author said no harem? IM IN Kingdom/village building? ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!i hope you don't drop this author samaa and update steadily, I'm looking forward to it.

Naruto: Village hidden in the Ocean

Action · Bullshitter

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6mth

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AMAZING! I HOPE AUTHOR-SAMA WON'T DROP THIS, THIS IS ONREOF THE BEST I HAVE READ SO FAR! PLEASE UPDATE SOON

Reborn in the Warring States Period

Anime & Comics · Pengincognito

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6mth

Commented

huhuhuhu why d'you drop it, its's very interesting and goodd ToT helppppp

ch 12 - Flame Wheel

Naruto : Great Entertainer of Hidden Leaf

Anime & Comics · Lazy_author_99

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6mth

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i wonder who is the person following him, i wish its deidara

ch 169 Chapter 169

Naruto: Family System

Anime & Comics · SoftCrow

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7mth

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wh3reeee's the next chapter ToT please

This book has been deleted.

Xie_avron

7mth

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exiting! thanks for the update >

ch 148 Chapter 148

Naruto: Family System

Anime & Comics · SoftCrow

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7mth

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ahhhh why is the chapter so short, i like this kind if story the most! its nice keep up the good work

ch 0 7 Chapter 7: Accumulate Willpower and Prepare to Draw Cards

I Opened A Restaurant In Konoha And Resurrected Hatake Sakumo

Anime & Comics · Immortal_Pyrsm

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7mth

Replied to BorutoIsTrash

hn

Naruto: Uchiha Mikaboshi

Anime & Comics · BorutoIsTrash

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7mth

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update soon please 🙏 huhuhu this is a good one

ch 35 Chapter 34 : Which Reward to Choose?

Ninja World Gold List: Uchiha Was Exposed At The Start

Anime & Comics · Nobody2NoBody

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7mth

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awee i hope you update soon author san

ch 36 Chapter 34 Dumb Move

Naruto: Rise Of The Uzumaki

Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All

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7mth

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this is a good idea i support it! :>

ch 36 Chapter 34 Dumb Move

Naruto: Rise Of The Uzumaki

Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All

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7mth

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oh yesss!!! ahhh this is making my blood boil!! its'sso exiting !

Only at this moment did they realize that the ruthlessness of Uchiha Kaito was directly proportional to his intelligence...

Naruto: Family System

Anime & Comics · SoftCrow

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7mth

Commented

it's been 2 yrs, ToT

More frequent updates coming soon.

Reborn as a Cursed Spirit

Anime & Comics · BooboboBoa

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7mth

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its alright

Q5: Is my writing style good? I feel like I put too much effort into either dialogue or thoughts but not into actions or the world. What do you guys think I should improve or stop doing?

Reborn as a Cursed Spirit

Anime & Comics · BooboboBoa

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7mth

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sounds fine!

Q4: Is the info I wrote about curses, sorcerers, techniques, etc. fine? I did alter the world a bit because I couldn't think of a good way to give the MC stuff. For example, I added the clan library, but it also seemed like a logical idea.