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I am liking this alot and was planning on reading until the paid chapters start but now on ch 17, i have the urge to drop it. I have nothing against the story at all and actually feel like the development of Elliot's and Sheree's relationship was good but after Sheree kissed Josh and didn't even apologize properly and sincerely with Elliot also not standing his ground on how upset that made him feel and not just brushing over the issue just because of some incidents that happened in between... I really feel like Author glossed over how angry and hurt Elliot should've been over the situation and Sheree actually being remorseful over it and understanding his side but that doesn't happen and now she's saying He belongs to her with such Confidence makes me really upset, maybe Author will address it in the later chapters but I'm not hopeful I also am not gonna come here in the comments and scream NTR like some chronically online people would because a kiss isn't as huge of a mistake as sex and is forgivable when discussed properly between two people... Fair enough they weren't in a specified relationship but glossing over how serious of an issue that is really gets me angry just thinking about it

I'm at 140 and i am enjoying the novel a bit but to constantly deal with his naive actions over and over even when things are explained to him and how he should act in a cultivation world, he still reacts the same... like bro, how many unreasonable idiots have you met already, surely you should've caught on by now how people act in this world, why you keep whining and explaining yourself and getting butthurt everytime. other than his naivete i have no issue with the novel at all, it;s better than most novels i have read and it's a good read for practically anyone if they can get over his naivete and personality.. 1 thing i still find confusing though and doesn't feel logical to me in context with the world is his supposed naivete. i get that it's been explained how it happened and all but think about it for a second. he was supposedly able to learn things super easily as a kid and was practically famous in the world, his family also seems to be high class so he should have a different upbringing than normal... in my opinion, he should have better communication skills and he should be more in the know about the world and how it works how ugly people can be(especially since he has been practically been insulted for like 5 years when he was bedridden)..., if he lived a somewhat normal life till he was 13, and 13 is a good age to be knowledgable about the world, especially in a technologically advanced society, he shouldn't be as naive and DUMB as he is. another thing that is confusing is he since he is a genius at learning things, he should've been able to pick up on body language, social cues, stuff like that, he should have a much greater degree of common sense of how things should work in the world, even in a cultivation one, so his actions could be perceived to be alot more as him being naive than him just being DUMB. how can you be so kind-hearted and so trusting of people when everybody close to you apart from your sister practically treated you like shit after you were deemed useless and only she stayed around. that should be an even bigger indicator of how people really are and he shouldn't need explanations on how cruel humans can be. maybe it gets better or is explained better later but i feel like the consequences his illness had on him as a person are less than what they should've been, he should feel more than just hating the feeling of moving around in your own body, being depressed about having to live such a life or enjoying the simple things other people wouldn't.