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Interesting novel so far with good grammar and spelling. I like that you didn’t choose Marco and made your own character as whitebeards vice captain

One of the best game of thrones novels out there. So far it hasn’t had a big grammar issues or stuff of that sort and the story is unique intriguing. Continue the good work

A good game of thrones novel with proper grammar. This could be something that you will enjoy. Hope that you continue the series, it is pretty good author.

Great novel with good grammar and new point of view. Hope that you continue with the consistent uploads. The story is progressing at a good speed too.

Honestly a new and cool idea to the story is devil fruits. I haven’t read similar stories about devil fruits in the GOT world, and I think that this concept works well. Perhaps make it so that the Targaryens don’t get destroyed. And/or make it so that there are a few Noble houses with devil fruits because if a small house like “Mormont” has a fruit, I’d assumed they’d get attacked or killed to prevent the “threat”.

Honestly off to a decent start. I hope the bandages maybe are play a role in something and are not just for show. As for the grammar and spelling mistakes, I recommend using ChatGPT of Copilot (by Microsoft) and ask it to fixing some spelling/capitalization issues. Looking forward to the novel

Pretty calm story. Good change of pace and setting compared to the other novels you see out there. I recommend to try reading it and see if you happen to like it

Good novel concept however it needs more story building, it’s moving too fast in my opinion. I like the idea of cherry blossoms, perhaps make some moves inspired by Byakuya is Bankai from bleach.

Really good novel to be honest. Pacing is good and the story is new and cool with good grammar. One of the best Game of Thrones fan fictions out there

Great novel with a unique story. Good grammar, story and quality and pacing too. Hope you don’t drop it and continue the series……………………………………………………….

Honestly like the fact that mc did not join the black bulls like mostly every black clover fan fic. Great story too, hope you don’t drop the novel.

Are you continuing this series or is it posted elsewhere. I really enjoyed this novel so far since it is one of the few fan fictions based on murim manwha.

Really enjoying the novel, especially since it’s relate to TBATE. Hoping you don’t drop it and keep continuing with the consistent uploads. Thanks for the novel

So far I am enjoying reading the novel. I really like the nano machine series and this is a good change of pace. I’m looking forward to the consistent updates too.