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RavenCorella

RavenCorella

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Author of Ichor: Blood Magic Sovereign; Join the community @ https://discord.gg/CgKPYJGMq7 If you liked my novel, please support it with feedback.

2023-07-07 Joined France

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RavenCorella
Replied to Kacper_Furude

Bit of blood geas intereference; plus she wouldn't have drained Yuki entirely... probably!

"You upended my life, broke ties to the person I hold dearest… yet… I can't bring myself to hate or to kill you.

Ichor: Blood Magic Sovereign

Ichor: Blood Magic Sovereign

Fantasy · RavenCorella

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RavenCorella
Replied to Kacper_Furude

It's a mental geas, not a contract he can find loopholes around :)

As he stared blankly at the sun and thought over the information he had on vampires, he realized his master was a bit careless in letting him go. Furthermore, she ordered him to do something that completely went against his nature.

Ichor: Blood Magic Sovereign

Ichor: Blood Magic Sovereign

Fantasy · RavenCorella

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RavenCorella
RavenCorella
Replied to Kacper_Furude

Soon :)

Stitching her abdomen wound closed, he reset her shoulder and put her broken arm in a makeshift cast. If he had magic, he could have done a better job, but now he could at most prioritize saving her life rather than hope for a perfect recovery.

Ichor: Blood Magic Sovereign

Ichor: Blood Magic Sovereign

Fantasy · RavenCorella

RavenCorella
Commented

others* 's is for implying possession. A person's <- suspicion. Good intro overall, though.

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RavenCorella
Replied to Kacper_Furude

Leo is the main character :) Just give him time to grow.

Despite trying to lighten it up, the gloom atmosphere settled and Leonardo finally acknowledged he would die.

Ichor: Blood Magic Sovereign

Ichor: Blood Magic Sovereign

Fantasy · RavenCorella

RavenCorella
Replied to ricebucket0_0

Hmm. You're right. I'll revise it.

RavenCorella
Replied to ricebucket0_0

twice? First time by a few seconds, then by a full minute.

The wheel of time ground to a halt once more, its sheer pressure forcing Muchen to put everything on the line for a brief chance at guiding its vector. An opening was seized as soon as it appeared, and time was reversed by another minute.

Ichor: Blood Magic Sovereign

Ichor: Blood Magic Sovereign

Fantasy · RavenCorella

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RavenCorella
Replied to Kacper_Furude

Luck only takes you so far :) At some point you also have to use your wit and never get on a battlefield to begin with =D

After the Rock stage, there was also the Iron Skin and the Jade Skin respectively. Were he to one day reach the final stage, his body's outward hardness should exceed steel. Even if he didn't employ any magic, he should be able to easily withstand blades, arrows and other trivial injuries. The kinetic impact could still batter his organs into mush, however, so it's best he kept a look out for catapults.

Ichor: Blood Magic Sovereign

Ichor: Blood Magic Sovereign

Fantasy · RavenCorella

RavenCorella
Replied to Kacper_Furude

Some things are best done manually. I love a good shower :] Restores mental energy and all that jazz.

Stretching lazily, he arranged the jewelry in a neat matte black case and ran out to clean himself before Chimente's arrival. He'd been quite neglectful of himself over the week and it wouldn't hurt to be more presentable.

Ichor: Blood Magic Sovereign

Ichor: Blood Magic Sovereign

Fantasy · RavenCorella

RavenCorella
Replied to Kacper_Furude

Only on earth :) Most archmages retire away and explore other dimensions. Prolly why the planet even made it untouched.

Beyond this stage, one had sufficient knowledge to upturn entire continents or shift the poles. However, these spells were very demanding and drew too much attention to be feasible. Even if Karmic Spirits didn't act to turn the mage to dust, other supernaturals surely would detect and stop him.

Ichor: Blood Magic Sovereign

Ichor: Blood Magic Sovereign

Fantasy · RavenCorella

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sonic blast at Akuma's skull.

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cast

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this doesn't sound right

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Upping my review from 3 to 4 stars as the author has shown significant improvement since he's started. The novel's flow is much smoother now. For those who like action, it's an immersive story. Give it a shot! :)

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what's this then?

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