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Writing quality is decent and world-building is also decent. The plot is a little bit weird. Sometimes the interactions between MC and love-interest are very cringy. But honestly, this is just a super wholesome and more sexual version of Mushoku Tensei. Like Arthur's dad is basically Paul. He's sexually active and a hero - but the complex is worse. Aria is just Zenith. Super powerful mage and not sexually active. Arthur is also just Rudeus. He was reincarnated and is an op mage/swordsman. Nyx is Eris. Margaret is kinda like sylphy. I've only read till chapter 63 but that's what I see this story as currently.

First of all, the grammer ruins this book for me. I could spot so many grammer mistakes. Adding to this, the "sound effects" were weird and kind of killed the atmosphere. And there's a distinct lack of comma's in the authors paragraphs, which is annoying as well. Other than the terrible grammer everything else is decent. Please fix your grammer, or at least read the chapter before uploading.