maybe it's just me but you describe the appearance quite a bit too directly
A 17-year-old boy wandered aimlessly in a vast desert land populated with sand dunes. His formerly bright brown eyes were now darkened with fatigue, and the clothes he wore had been tattered beyond recognition. However, one could easily identify his clothes as a school uniform of some sort. The brown blazer he wore had faded intensely, and his trousers had one leg partially ripped apart, exposing his bruised leg.
Fantasy · Lingering_Starfire
Can't stop feeling the vibe of a whole new adventure unfolding here. An mc with a supporting character directly aiding him in the first chapters of the story. I'm definitely in for the story and the turnout of events. Kudos lingering_starfire....
Soul:A!
Fantasy · Lingering_Starfire