I will try cause someone also said that too much info dumps will not make this better
Sorry man if it's not up to tour taste cause I'm a fan of cultivation so i made this. And i will tske note of tour suggestion
Thanks you!
Your story is still in early stage so i won't say much. I just want to say you should improve character development and plot. Overall, good potential!
Good plot! I also like how you tell the story. You must govus on plot and character development cause that is the strong pints of your novel.
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Good romance for me. It has nice plot and good character development. Just make sure to properly develop your character cause its this book most strong point!
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Good book but definitely needs improvement. Specially world building and chatacter development. Hut nuways it's still good..................................
Well as you know, cultivation is a broken system but definitely takes time
In that moment of realization, Ling Fan felt a deep sense of despair. Just imagine, after dedicating himself to cultivation for thousands of years, all his efforts had inexplicably gone to waste. The impact of this setback was truly immense.
Peerless Cultivator In Another World
Fantasy · ZenoShin
Good one but need improvement. Specially, character development and plot. Improve grammar too cause good grammar is always the best. Keep up the good work.
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In the world of cultivation of immortality, there is a person known as the 'Evil Genius'. He is an expert in many fields. Because of this, he is respected and feared by all. This is not only because he has unparalleled strength but also because he masters many unique knowledge. However, this man accidentally transmigrated into another world, and his former body no longer what it used to be. His body now had turned into a kid. And now, let's accompany him towards his journey in this unfamiliar world as he discovers of shocking things, makes companions, unravels the secrets of his transmigration, and reach the peak of his life once again. --------- Note: Even though he's entitled as "Evil Genius," he is not evil, but a neutral mc. He will only do things that benefit him. You will further understand his personality as you read the story. --------- Note: Cover is not mine.37 Chs 75 Collections
Thanks for the reminder, I'll keep it in mind
Peerless Cultivator In Another World
Fantasy · ZenoShin