Webnovel Author: ZenoShin - Novel Collection

Thanks for the reminder, I'll keep it in mind

I will try cause someone also said that too much info dumps will not make this better

Sorry man if it's not up to tour taste cause I'm a fan of cultivation so i made this. And i will tske note of tour suggestion

Thanks you!

Your story is still in early stage so i won't say much. I just want to say you should improve character development and plot. Overall, good potential!

Good romance for me. It has nice plot and good character development. Just make sure to properly develop your character cause its this book most strong point!

Good book but definitely needs improvement. Specially world building and chatacter development. Hut nuways it's still good..................................

Good one but need improvement. Specially, character development and plot. Improve grammar too cause good grammar is always the best. Keep up the good work.

Good novel for me, i honestly the story pacing in this story. And the description of this never bore me. The character devemepment is needed!

Heys guys i'm being forced to review here haha, joke aside. The plot good for me, although i'm not into romance genre, i still find it entertaining. The grammar is good and the curent development of the characters are ok. Wish your book luck!

Good for me. Plot is ok and grammar is readable. What i really like the Mc is op. You should focust character development and world building. Keep writing author, your book has the potential!

Good plot. Overall entertaining for. It just lack character details for me but it's great. So keep up the good work and good luck on being premium soon!

Thanks!