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BlueCactusE

BlueCactusE

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2023-07-20 Joined United States

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BlueCactusE
BlueCactusE
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Once again, the other seven members all showed paper while June showed rock.聽

From Thug to Idol: Transmigrating to a Survival Show

From Thug to Idol: Transmigrating to a Survival Show

Fantasy 路 SandKastle

BlueCactusE
Commented

I guess he goes with scissors often.

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The seven other members showed rock while June showed scissors, making the group cheer.聽

From Thug to Idol: Transmigrating to a Survival Show

From Thug to Idol: Transmigrating to a Survival Show

Fantasy 路 SandKastle

BlueCactusE
Commented

serene wrap -> saran wrap Though, I do feel pretty serene, and not worried about food spoiling, when it's wrapped up in saran wrap.

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Alexi gave her a questioning look but she ignored it. After he left, she went to the kitchen to make herself some breakfast but saw a few sandwiches covered in serene wrap on the counter. They had a sticky note on them that said, 'Sleepyhead'. She unwrapped the sandwiches and ate them before taking a shower. Then she got to work.聽

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Fantasy 路 Realm_Weaver

BlueCactusE
Commented

Because that's less scary for a seven y.o. 馃槄

"He's right you know. Well, not exactly. You wouldn't be crushed into a paste but blood mist."

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Fantasy 路 Realm_Weaver

BlueCactusE
Commented

This is great!

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"Pro tip, save the stems. They are needed for another recipe in the Breath Series." Zeke reminded her.

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Fantasy 路 Realm_Weaver

BlueCactusE
Commented

Those sound like good potions the military would definitely want. 馃憣

Zeke ran to his, got a notepad and began writing three recipes that the military would want. They were, Breath of Poison Resistance, Breath of Speed, and Breath of Strength. The Breath Series marked the beginning of his rise in his past life. He had utilised ingredients that were considered relatively useless and turned them into incredible potions.

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Fantasy 路 Realm_Weaver

BlueCactusE
Commented

ran to his, -> ran to his room, Maybe?

Zeke ran to his, got a notepad and began writing three recipes that the military would want. They were, Breath of Poison Resistance, Breath of Speed, and Breath of Strength. The Breath Series marked the beginning of his rise in his past life. He had utilised ingredients that were considered relatively useless and turned them into incredible potions.

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Fantasy 路 Realm_Weaver

BlueCactusE
Replied to sapient

Not really. He's seven. If he hadn't lied and told her had dreams, instead of being an adult in a kid's body, then she might have reacted differently.

Katherine glared at Zeke, "Language young man. I don't care if the memories are affecting you but if you cuss one more time, I will whoop your bottom." Then she looked at Alexi and said, "Explain."

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Fantasy 路 Realm_Weaver

BlueCactusE
Commented

That is I -> That is why I

It's not the ingredients I'm worried about. To brew the elixir I need at least an S Grade chemistry lab. But that's for way later. Before that, I need to get used to brewing potions without the help of skills or any mana of my own. That is I wanted to use the school's chemistry lab. For practice."

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Fantasy 路 Realm_Weaver

BlueCactusE
Commented

There's an extra space at the beginning of the paragraph. 馃 馃槄

聽"There are many Angel and Demon subspecies. Whose bloodlines do you have? How do you know all this? And don't you dare say that everything will become clear in the end."

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Fantasy 路 Realm_Weaver

BlueCactusE
Commented

Avatistic -> Atavistic "Atavistic is an adjective that means something is very primitive, like the behavior or feelings of our earliest ancestors."

The repeated clash allowed the Neo-Human bloodline to strengthen and with no replenishment of Angel or Demon bloodlines, they simply disappeared. All but two. The Angel and Demon blood in my parents was very strong. Dormant but strong. I think their bloodlines had become avatistic but they had passed the best times to awaken them and without the right trigger, they could only affect their physical appearance and affinities."

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Fantasy 路 Realm_Weaver

BlueCactusE
Commented

So, they were desperate people, so fixated on a critical goal, they ended up doing horrible and evil things to others. 馃槙 Good thing it's a novel.

But I guess that there were two very crazy men among those researchers. They fused these bloodlines into individuals and forced them to reproduce with humans. Then they killed them before they could turn.聽

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Fantasy 路 Realm_Weaver

BlueCactusE
Replied to SpicySlimey

Sounds about right. I was only thinking demons and angels, based on the elixir he made, and hadn't considered the elves.

Alexi answered, "Magnus had a strong affinity for the Shadow, Fire, and Soul elements. As for Isabelle, she had a strong affinity for Fire, Light, and Life elements."

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Fantasy 路 Realm_Weaver

BlueCactusE
Commented

The last sentence was cut off midsentence.

"It's a project that took place about 50 years after the first Demi-Human was born. Some researchers took inspiration from the birth of the Demi-Human race. They discovered the plasticity of the human bloodline and sought to fuse our enemies' bloodlines similarly. The wanted to聽

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Fantasy 路 Realm_Weaver

BlueCactusE
Commented

My brother lost part of his eyebrows when lighting a grill a couple of decades ago; luckily, they grew back pretty quickly. It's not like he waited or anything, so one or more of the gas holes must have been blocked or leaking. It's been a good reminder ever since.

They had ice cream for dessert and returned to the living room. The adults drank a little and they resumed their conversation. While Katherine was telling a story about the time Alexi had burned his eyebrows off, Alexi was staring at the two boys, seemingly lost in thought.聽

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Fantasy 路 Realm_Weaver

BlueCactusE
BlueCactusE
Replied to Nenengb

It's in the same sentence and is alright for the context and comparison. They could have used completely in one or both places instead. If it frequently shows up going forward, then it might be good to suggest alternative words. 馃憤

The resume in front of the bartender looked exactly like that of a complete slacker. If there was something outstanding about it, it was utterly non-existent, but to say it was utterly useless wouldn't be true either. Generally, people in the field wouldn't be able to find any teammates, and slackers wouldn't look for other slackers.

I Am Also An Extraordinary Creature

I Am Also An Extraordinary Creature

Sci-fi 路 Passing by Traveler

BlueCactusE
BlueCactusE
Commented

for a long. -> for a long time.

Adam fended off a cascade of blows from the Granite Ghost using only his hands. His gloves eliminated the damage to his palms and reduced the recoil several times, allowing Adam to keep up his active pace for a long.聽

Endless Evolution: Last Star

Endless Evolution: Last Star

Fantasy 路 Arlemit

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