A comprehensive story. This story has a good storyline and background, but I'd recommend the better use of punctuations, contractions and vocabulary to make the story have a more professional and astute outlook. Kudos to the authoress for this great story! I can't wait to read the Part two of the story.
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A comprehensive story. This story has a good storyline and background, but I'd recommend the better use of punctuations, contractions and vocabulary to make the story have a more professional and astute outlook. Kudos to the authoress for this great story! I can't wait to read the Part two of the story.
My Trip to Toronto
Teen · grace_jones