Why would you not update the new chapter? You did it so well before, i mean you lead us to the world you created that beyond my imagination and then you delayed during unknown times. Your story is fascinating, yeah, but not perfect, I think, you haven't explored deep enough about character's personality and how big the world is, but don't stop keeping up a very promising work like this due to that. To be frank, you had a good debut with this novel, and I'm looking forward to seeing how your work would surprise and challenge my brain, emotion and passion for novel, you know, because your story is very challenging for those readers who get bored for some categories which get milked through and through, over and over again. I mean, your work is a new wind with a vision and an unique style of writing that make some readers like me feel excited and and iI can safely to say that it has huge potential to develop. I just hope what I said will make you improve some perspectives of writing a novel as a writer/ novelist. Sorry for my overreaction and sincerity with full of expectation make you feel uncomfortable and a bit offended. Can't wait to your upcoming chapter after your promising return. I just get started for it and I have you an advice: no wonder you work can be something else if you try your best, trust me, so just move forward with what you believe, don't suspect yourself anymore
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Why would you not update the new chapter? You did it so well before, i mean you lead us to the world you created that beyond my imagination and then you delayed during unknown times. Your story is fascinating, yeah, but not perfect, I think, you haven't explored deep enough about character's personality and how big the world is, but don't stop keeping up a very promising work like this due to that. To be frank, you had a good debut with this novel, and I'm looking forward to seeing how your work would surprise and challenge my brain, emotion and passion for novel, you know, because your story is very challenging for those readers who get bored for some categories which get milked through and through, over and over again. I mean, your work is a new wind with a vision and an unique style of writing that make some readers like me feel excited and and iI can safely to say that it has huge potential to develop. I just hope what I said will make you improve some perspectives of writing a novel as a writer/ novelist. Sorry for my overreaction and sincerity with full of expectation make you feel uncomfortable and a bit offended. Can't wait to your upcoming chapter after your promising return. I just get started for it and I have you an advice: no wonder you work can be something else if you try your best, trust me, so just move forward with what you believe, don't suspect yourself anymore
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