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Why do you like writing unfinished sentences with «...» after each paragraph it finally become unreadable, incomprehensible with lot of commentary that like to ask stupid questions in order to make up excuses for filler. Example of the novel structure. Chapter 411...onomatopoeia [commentary] did leo... onomatopoeia [commentary] eat a clown...?! onomatopoeia, onomatopoeia, onomatopoeia [commentary] Isn't Revealing his secret skill stupid? He don't really know his own skill operate, he travel in a parallel universe 2time and he reassure Yeon that she is just a fiction in a novel.(MC is truly a master of decduction lol) Is the existence of novel allowing the creation of parallel universes or parallele universe the origine of the creation of a novel. Or maybe Leo is half-human and half-deity(like hercule or minautor &c...) his skill creating new reality. There is something stupid how the Mc defeated the protagonist(a little before chapter 411), he didn't really prepare, he didn't have any proper counter, he wasn't even in the same level but wasn't really interested to true preparation but always say it no the time then final resolution, he trick the protagonist... it was nonesense after nonesense so whynot 411 chapters to visite just 2worlds and each is hyper repetitive on level up then level up then level up... This is too much. Are you stuck on a pre-puberty teen period where you would have dream if cultivation world existed? Why don't we see the MC in his reality trying to use his new skill? Or skill other than the combat bµllsh*t. Why is he trying to just read cultivation novel i thought he could read anything? Suddenly lazy? He could read "Saw"(horror-thriller), "Cube"(investigation novel with pulze to solve), "Avatar"(adventure, with new dialect discovery, new culture). You can imagine as i have almost reach my upper limit... until those sentences: "How could I hate you?! I was the stupid one for doubting my own heart. Let's spend every following second together. No, please let me spend it with you!" Since he was the one in the wrong, Leo naturally had to be the one to make it up. "Also, please stop crying, my heart can't take it either." Wiping away Yeon's precious tears, Leo pulled her into his embrace. What a great and experienced reader was he! In the end, he was just an insecure idiot who made his partner cry. "Mm, I won't cry anymore, so don't make such a sad face either!" You've succeeded destroying my stomac here, with an amalgam of lovey-dovey, emotional bµllsh*t, some tears , the MC telling all his life as if it was really interesting. But ill give you a scoop, i utterly don't care! Can You delete the AI that's writing in your stead? I'm sure your not 14yo I've got enought bullsh*t with emotional cr@p and lovey-dovey nonesense for a life time when i read "Suprem Magnus".

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chapter 22 ; I hate VR novel but this one seems to be in reality so why was that writtened in the Lord chat: _“F*ck! Did you see Big Boss Blazing Sun’s new deal? This time, it’s 20,000 units of Black Iron-Tier Elementary Grade Desert Fog Lizard meat!” _“Every time I see the transaction volume of the Lord of The Blazing Sun, I feel that it’s ridiculous!” _“Is there a possibility that the Lord of The Blazing Sun is cheating?” Is there a rules that state you are forbidden to cheat? I can only see this sentence in a game or it would be nonesense otherwise. The first extraterrial we meet, the MC butchered his territory by greed there was not ethic issue involve(i want it i take it, you're just dead meat as if reality was like a game). Later we saw that no just alien lord but other human lord was the MC's target. The author just played a game and describe what he saw mixed with what he would have like to see possible. Human right are irrelevant, different races with different culture are there to be butchered. The author doesn't care about developing the background of the characters, everything is linear. Here again: _“Is there a possibility that the Lord of The Blazing Sun is cheating?” yeah, feel like i lost my time reading this cr@p. There is a clear confusion between reality and VR, killing conscient creatures are as easy as killing MOB, i'm clearly loosing my fµcking time here damnit!!! I'll DROPE the cr@p here after 22chapter i find my limit.

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