MoonMoon_

MoonMoon_

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2023-07-31 Joined Global
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MoonMoon_
MoonMoon_
3 months ago
Commented

Maybe open the bracket at "of the" 😊

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The Inner Odyssey

The Inner Odyssey

Fantasy · Ash_Monarch

MoonMoon_
MoonMoon_
7 months ago
Commented

Too accurate.. way too accurate 😅

"I don't understand your point. Anyway, thank you, Professor!" 

The Noble Queen-A Shadow Slave Fanfic

The Noble Queen-A Shadow Slave Fanfic

Book&Literature · NobleQueenBee

MoonMoon_
MoonMoon_
7 months ago
Commented

sounds... familiar 🤭

One of them had forgone the chair and was sitting on the desk itself while engrossed in a book. The young person's short, dark hair fell forward as two brown eyes focused intensely on the page. A delicate hand blocked part of the title, but Noble could make out the words "Guardian" and "Rynnlee". 

The Noble Queen-A Shadow Slave Fanfic

The Noble Queen-A Shadow Slave Fanfic

Book&Literature · NobleQueenBee

MoonMoon_
MoonMoon_
7 months ago
Commented

'sighed anciently' 🤭.. I see you

"It feels like just yesterday you brought Honey home and those boys were barely a twinkle in your husband's eye. Of course, it feels like it was only last week when you came to the Academy for the first time as a student. Time really does fly," Julius sighed a little too anciently, causing himself to chuckle at his own reminiscing. "Forgive me, I fear I am boring you."

The Noble Queen-A Shadow Slave Fanfic

The Noble Queen-A Shadow Slave Fanfic

Book&Literature · NobleQueenBee

MoonMoon_
MoonMoon_
7 months ago
Commented

Let's all appreciate the tactful way bee said 'skill issue' 🤣🤣

"The runes are all as described. But the wielder is mistaken on one point. This tier one Memory is working perfectly. Its single enchantment is passive, not active. She should be able to use it. Perhaps it is an issue with her skill." 

The Noble Queen-A Shadow Slave Fanfic

The Noble Queen-A Shadow Slave Fanfic

Book&Literature · NobleQueenBee

MoonMoon_
MoonMoon_
7 months ago
Posted

Ohoho 🤭even the start of this fanfic already catches your attention. Beautiful story, amazing writing quality and peak entertainment. This story goes above and beyond any fanfic

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MoonMoon_
MoonMoon_
7 months ago
Commented

As usual ... stop running away! 🤭

When she opened them again, the train was descending as it came to the next stop. The pale boy stood. "That's enough wholesomeness for me today. I'm out of here."

The Noble Queen-A Shadow Slave Fanfic

The Noble Queen-A Shadow Slave Fanfic

Book&Literature · NobleQueenBee

MoonMoon_
MoonMoon_
9 months ago
Commented

Haha sunny does have a habit of failing in that way 🤭. Just ask the Mountain King

"I just wanted to train peacefully in the Dreamscape. Who knew people would make such a ruckus about me learning a few battle styles? This whole thing went out of control really fast. Ugh… believe it or not, I actually wanted to use the Mongrel persona to stay under the radar. That plan… yeah, it failed spectacularly."

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

MoonMoon_
MoonMoon_
11 months ago
Posted

Wha .. what an emotional rollercoaster you took me on. My heart is so broken and so full all at the same time. This story should be way more popular than it is. Thank you Guilty for taking me on this journey. Although a lot of people try and find a connection between free fall and shadow slave, I feel free fall had/has its own flavour. I was able to smile, laugh, cry, love and hate,I felt exhilarated and devastated . You truly have a way of conveying emotion through your writing. And I felt every single bit ... To the point my heart was beating wildly on the last line.

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MoonMoon_
MoonMoon_
11 months ago
Commented

🤭

All in all, I felt like Dante descending further and further down into Hell.

Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)

Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)

Sci-fi · Guiltythree