Antonio_4979

Thanks for the chapter. Author, I'm liking the novel so far. There are just some things that I think Oliver should have considered. The most important thing is how Oliver seems to not experiment that much with his power, particularly the option granting one. For example, he limits himself to looting only the teeth, claws, and sometimes bones and hide. I don't get why he doesn't use the muscles and organs also; it feels like a waste. Like the organs and muscles of the Marrow God, I can understand if you don't want to give him good options for these things, but he doesn't know that. He should try at least. What about taking the brain of a human or humanoid, like the dark mage that summoned the Marrow God? He could have gotten his brain and opted it out. It could have been a consumable item or a one-time item that gives him knowledge in magic or something. Also, when he went to the Savage Land, he appeared above the dragon blood. I think that he could only get so little because it was being absorbed by the ground. Why didn't he take that soil and opt it out? It could have been at least green-grade soil. You could have put it that it had some percentage of making some dragonic fruit or something. I also don't get the obsession with creating a dragon set. He already saw that the sword was not that great; the Marrow Devourer is better. Why not wait until he has better materials to make it? Also, why doesn't he try to put his blood in things? It might make the item be connected with him. These are things that I thought of these last few days while reading this fic. Only when reading it, Oliver has had the power for three years and is constantly thinking about optioning items. It makes little sense that he doesn't have more ideas. I get that some haven't been revealed yet because he doesn't have the necessary materials, but he could do better. Well, that is all. I like the novel very much. Keep updating, please.

ch 44 HUNTING(chapter 44)

Marvel-Comics: Overgeared

Anime & Comics · Bulale_Abali

Antonio_4979

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Thx

ch 96 Maid

Naruto : Hidden Cloud

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Antonio_4979

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Thx for the chapter sir

ch 43 getting hired and meeting moon knight(chapter 43)

Marvel-Comics: Overgeared

Anime & Comics · Bulale_Abali

Antonio_4979

2mth

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Thx fot the chap

ch 95 New limits

Naruto : Hidden Cloud

Anime & Comics · ImagineMaker

Antonio_4979

2mth

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Thanks for the chapter!

ch 94 Half beast

Naruto : Hidden Cloud

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Antonio_4979

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Thank for the chapter

ch 92 Defeat at last

Naruto : Hidden Cloud

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Antonio_4979

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Really good fan fic, the main character isn't naive at al There's a steady progression, with the main character not being overpowered from the start. Well-implemented enemies provide a challenge to the main character. Overall, it's a pretty good novel.

In Marvel As Dante

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Antonio_4979

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Masterpiece! The main character isn't as naive as the Z fighters but still retains that warrior honor. There's a steady progression, with the main character not being overpowered from the start. Well-implemented enemies provide a challenge to the main character. Overall, it's a pretty good novel.