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This Novel is pretty good, i like the theme of Revenge huh? but keep improving[img=update][img=fp][img=exp][img=coins][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp] it,
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Well Write, Flashback, Plot, but explain the character design, it is well-write, i give you 10/, make sure improve this one, might bring some reader to this, or gain lot collection or like or view.[img=faceslap]
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This Novel was better than, what i expect for, while i read other author novel, but this was better than some of it, but there is one problem on my mind, is that you need to improve your growth of story development.
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As, i did read some of those chapter half of it, it turn out pretty good, but confused on chapter 2, is chapter 1 just show him how Our MC was raise, and chapter 2 just go right to the point (like skipping), but this novel was pretty cool, i like it, the StoryLine is mess up, but getting better through out the chapter, plus how he explain the world background and the Tale of History was insane, i give it 10/6, can't wait for chapter 3.[img=coins][img=recommend]
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Nice Novel, I like your theme and writing style, it got good imagination story of vivid words, the world background, it just such shameless, character design; good going. The Way you write, it's insane, continued writing on the plot.
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