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The author is not planning to do auto-NTR with these clones, right? I really hope the mc doesn't make his clones find any women, that would be instant drop.

It's been two chapters and he hasn't even bothered to look at the descriptions of his gacha prizes. Furthermore, the third prize seemed (by the name) like it would help him with his bad luck, but either he was stupid and didn't activate it yet or it just doesn't work and he will continue with this ridiculous bad luck. He's also being a beta simp and that's really annoying me. I don't think that just because one is a virgin someone will be nervous around a random woman, this is more of a mental problem of social phobia than "common virgin" behavior.

Unfortunately, the author chose the easy way out and ruined his story, I'm stopping here, goodbye.

When I saw the newbie gift I even left the page and went to see the author's profile thinking it was the same author of that COTE fanfic (I would stop reading because I hated the mc of that fanfic, he didn't feel anything for anyone and that loses its charm very quickly)

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This dialogue format is very uncomfortable to read, I think it would be better if it were something like this: [Ding!] [Congratulations on turning 5! System unlocked, ready to boot, host?] “Yes, system, go ahead, I’ve been looking forward to this for years.” we don't need to say who is speaking all the time because we know, only when another character enters the dialogue that we should be informed, something like: “Well, system, tell me something, can I talk to you through thoughts?” [Ding!] [Yes, you can communicate with me by thoughts and even wordless meanings.] "Great, this will be a lot easier for-" John was about to continue the conversation when he was interrupted by another voice “John-nii-sama, what are you doing there? The food will get cold” Lina said as she entered the room.

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What a forced drama, isn't it just about sleeping with Komi-san and not abandoning her after that? Very simple. And don't even come up with an excuse that this is taking advantage of her, because with the way she is socially inept, anything would be taking advantage of her, so there's no reason to feel bad about that.

It has an SS rating and burns at something around 75-80 degrees??? WHAT USE HER THOUSANDS OF STATISTICS? That's the problem with adding statistics to stories, they won't make any sense, like that over 600k int, so she should be smarter than Rick Sanchez with that number.

The system had referred to Erza as S+, so she is much stronger than the mc? Orion was also supposed to be a high level spirit and the mc fought to a draw and now he was supposed to be stronger but he was beaten by a B rank monster. Is the mc weak as hell then? I say this because you're leaving everything very vague, we don't know the statistics of F-SSS rank hunters, so when you show him fighting and almost getting beaten by some cannon fodder (C rank monsters) it's hard not to find the mc very weak for someone who has a system and has been with it for many months. I'm going to keep reading but I was really discouraged by this fusion story, it seems like he can't do anything without merging with his spirit.

Even that useless Komuro managed to survive peacefully during the anime and this fake mc copy of Gojo couldn't last a day hahaha he's really rubbish, he has superhuman strength, superhuman senses and he still manages to get bitten. (And if the author separates the MC from the heroines of the story just to force the plot, this goes from bad to worse, he wants to imitate those Chinese story plots where the protagonist's childhood girlfriend is forced to go to a sect on the other side of the world , disgusting)

Por que adicionar essa Miku que é uma vagabunda no harém? Tem tantas garotas na obra original, ainda tem também Miwa e Kirigakure que você adicionou a mais e quer que ele fique com essa puta? Ela pode ter o passado triste que for, não muda o fato de ela ser fácil pra krl, além de que ela é inútil no grande esquema das coisas, não vale a pena mais uma boca para alimentar com essa puta, a não ser que você quisesse que ela namorasse o ex-protagonista, aí eu não me importaria, mas o mc ficar com uma mina dessas é realmente ridículo e me fez perder muito a vontade de ler isso. Estava feliz pelo autor brasileiro e história boa, mas adicionar Miku realmente atrapalhou tudo

Another thing is that it's very difficult for the MC to gain points, he has immeasurable potential and so far he hasn't increased 1 point naturally (not to mention he was much weaker than high school kids). Another thing is that the author said that there will be moments of despair, man, he gained several cheats and will there be moments of despair in a zombie apocalypse? So the cheats were of no use, it would have been easier if you just transmigrated the mc without any explanation or cheat in that world and left him to fend for himself, since he doesn't even use his advantages, so far he has only used food creation once time and didn't even consider the idea of ​​training in target shooting and among other things to gain skills, it depends entirely on the system. I say this because on the first day he cooked a fried egg and already gained a skill, then he gained beginner CQC to make a good impression, shouldn't he be able to gain this just by training some kicks and punches? Also why do you have to be a beginner? he should at least be an expert, because he can acquire beginner skills on his own. But I stopped reading mainly because it started with this story about smoking cigarettes, that's unnecessary, it's not cool, it's not stylish or anything like that, I don't understand anyone who thinks this will make the character more attractive, it won't, it just It will leave him with smelly breath and people will move away so as not to smell his stench. (yes, I despise people who smoke)

I'm going to stop reading for several reasons that discouraged me but I'll just mention two of the most random ones. First is the mc smoking cigarettes, man, he said he smoked when he was very stressed and now he smokes all the time, not to mention that cigarettes are the last thing you should consume IN AN APOCALYPSE, they may have infinite potential, but no He's immune to cancer and lung disease, do you want him to get asthma and get tired of running or are you going to wear plot armor to avoid that? The other thing is this statistics system, this never works because the authors can't establish a base and always end up forgetting the mc's points, for example, at the beginning the author said that the MC had a physique compared to professional athletes with 12 points, that guy who died first was supposedly above average and had 9 points, but now it shows Rei, a 16-17 year old girl with 15 points or more, the author should have established what the average human was and what each point increased, for example; average human - 10 points (about 65-70kg lifting strength), each point increases about 7kg, so for the mc to be athletic he would have to have about 15 points of strength.

The only thing that really irritated me about this was this "family code of conduct" and these "gods" that don't make any sense (in addition to mc's slowness to understand something as obvious as isekai). About the "gods" what I want to say is that they themselves said that they are like the god that we humans believe in, only "more powerful", but man... The god that we believe in is omnipotent, omniscient and omnipresent, so there is no way anyone can be more powerful than him, they can be on the same level, but not more powerful, there is also the fact that they are "sad" and "happy" for mc, let's be honest with each other, throughout his eternity and infinite multiverses they saw countless humans who suffered MUCH more than the mc, besides our god is portrayed as a perfect being and if they are "better" they should be too, therefore, they shouldn't have any feelings, since Feelings cloud your judgment whether for good or bad, so seeing "gods" needing to explain things to the mc instead of simply putting knowledge in his head and needing to "prove" it to him by creating something doesn't make any sense. It's the same thing as a surgeon operating on the author's phimosis in front of an ant to prove to it that he is really a doctor.

Unfortunately I'm going to have to stop reading. I found the theme very interesting at first, but as the chapters went on I felt numb. It was much cooler to see him manipulate others and it would be much cooler for him to manipulate girls to have them than to simply force them. There's also the fact that MC "has no feelings", like, dude? You even have the audacity to say he wasn't a psychopath or something. I understand the argument that someone with power above the law would not have inhibitors, but it wouldn't be like that, because it all depends on the context, in his context as a handsome, rich, intelligent, strong and charismatic guy it wouldn't make sense for him to "need" resort to what he did to the girls. For me, it totally lost its appeal when he started talking about not being attracted to anyone, like, what's the point then? Why doesn't he just commit suicide? Then you can tell me he's after the "jade beauties", but I would bet he wouldn't feel anything for them either. And a normal person wouldn't be okay with the idea of ​​abusing women and committing murder. I'm not a hypocrite, if I had power I would "abuse" it too, but I wouldn't force a girl to sleep with me, at most I could kill some guy who was bothering the girl I'm interested in and flex to show her that I it was the best option because it was the best in everything. In short, what I wanted to say is that it's like reading a story about a "soulless" guy who just does things for the sake of doing them, he's afraid of the system and isn't making the most of his time, let's be honest, it's kind of difficult for you not to end up feeling at least a little in love with the girls in this work, they are all unique and captivating, so seeing a mannequin in the middle of everyone and just acting with lust and presumption is quite boring.

I understand, anyway this story seems interesting, I'm just not going to continue reading because initially I hadn't seen that it was from HSDXD, I thought it was from DC or Marvel, I didn't even watch the anime or read the manga of this thing, so I'm not really interested in fanfics like that.