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Commented Your chapters are too short But it’s nice keep it up😁😁
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Teen · Blackbeauty515
Your chapters are too short But it’s nice keep it up😁😁
ch 0 2 CHAPTER 2
Teen · Blackbeauty515
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The book is good Just needs more development , More characters,And a good setting The Oliver character is my favorite. Alice is too weak and acts stupid most of the time
Rain Of 'TERROR'
Teen · Blackbeauty515