DeRuth_NG

9mth

Posted

After reading chapter 1 until 7. The story is a little messed up. There should be only one focus. I will continue reading this. It's kinda good so hope I the author will improve the story.

Question? Am I An NPC? So Cringe!

Fantasy · GIDICAsan

DeRuth_NG

9mth

Commented

Attributes should be better.

*Author: Uhh I've been putting a lot of confusing terms here. Like the attributes and stats. In my opinion, they are similar terms so I just don't know what's more better to insert. Sorry 🙏

Question? Am I An NPC? So Cringe!

Fantasy · GIDICAsan

DeRuth_NG

9mth

Commented

I think there must be a problem here the sentence was just cut off.

The reason why Giann was hunting these Rabbits who were 3 levels above him was the Haste Rab

Question? Am I An NPC? So Cringe!

Fantasy · GIDICAsan

DeRuth_NG

9mth

Commented

*isekaiIt's kinda hilarious if you write a japanese verb then to make it past tense you just add "d."

"This game too real! Feels like I'm in a different world. Did I get "eskaied"?!" another player, who was a berserker class, asked himself while pinching his cheeks hoping he got reincarnated.

Question? Am I An NPC? So Cringe!

Fantasy · GIDICAsan

DeRuth_NG

9mth

Commented

Not necessary because in some games players could attack any NPC so uhh. Well since most games dont't have that feature I guess you could use this concept.

[But there are certain limited benefits for an NPCs. I mean they couldn't be attacked by players unless the NPCs are criminals and bosses. This could be the perfect disguise!] Giann thought.

Question? Am I An NPC? So Cringe!

Fantasy · GIDICAsan

DeRuth_NG

9mth

Commented

Yeah you should really avoid these ones when you write. It should be better if you type your opinions on the last part.

*Author: That's right! GO TOUCH SOME GRASS!! SHEESHH!*

Question? Am I An NPC? So Cringe!

Fantasy · GIDICAsan

DeRuth_NG

9mth

Commented

MC having too much expectations haha

"Seriously when I hit 17? Why not 18? Wait Amused Abyss said a Guide. Not with the fucking word system on it! Wait is this one of the stories where MC's receive some system the go crazy powerful and shiz? Sheeshh!" Giann spoke.