Kratos5627

4d

Posted

link: http://samlib.ru/editors/m/muhin_d_w/indexdate.shtml

Red Nara

Anime & Comics · l_legolas

Kratos5627

4d

Replied to k1lausNamikaze

Hey I got the link. It is very much worth it to read it. It was a very long journey. Here it is: http://samlib.ru/editors/m/muhin_d_w/indexdate.shtml .

Red Nara

Anime & Comics · l_legolas

Kratos5627

6d

Replied to k1lausNamikaze

dude can you give us the link of this fic.

Red Nara

Anime & Comics · l_legolas

Kratos5627

23d

Posted

Amazing fic. Keep going. Would like more if you delve on lore and side characters a bit though.

Elden Ring : Ascension

Video Games · Lucien_Morningstar

Kratos5627

29d

Commented

Brings back nostalgia.

After falling asleep with surprising ease, Ren was awakened by the sound of a soft piano song being played, accompanied by a melodic voice.

Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.

Video Games · BonVoyage

Kratos5627

30d

Commented

dude. The description is just like fang yuan. plain appearance but deep abyss like eyes.

The three kids nodded before turning the page once again. Their eyes landed on a picture. The person in the picture didn't look unique like the 5 that preceded him. On first look, he looked like any other young man. However, there was one distinct feature that caught the eye of the trio. It was his eyes, they were as dark as the very abyss itself.

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Fantasy · Devil_Hex

Kratos5627

1mth

Commented

I don't know why but this cliffhanger left me blue balled here. It is not a nice feeling.

ch 573 Chapter 567 : Fujin's Effect

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Fantasy · Devil_Hex

Kratos5627

2mth

Commented

At least he isn't in warhammer 40k. So thank God for small mercies. I will probably add this story in my list. I just hope author wouldn't needlessly torture his mc too much. Because corn's work get too edgy sometimes. But apart from that keep it up.👍👍👍

ch 0 1 Chapter 1 - Rough Start.

Star Wars: Galactic System.

Movies · CORNBRINGER

Kratos5627

2mth

Commented

Thank you. It is not a good feeling to have blue balls the whole week.

[Since I've given you enough cliffhangers, for one week, I've decided to cut you guys a break and release another chapter early. Enjoy.]

Dragon Ball: Back in Black

Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra

Kratos5627

2mth

Commented

Thanks for the chapter.

ch 57 The Problems of a New Pathway

Cosmos Divider - Lord of Mysteries

Book&Literature · ParagonDaoOfBS

Kratos5627

2mth

Commented

And So it begins.....

ch 526 Chapter 520 : Dressing Down!

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Fantasy · Devil_Hex

Kratos5627

2mth

Commented

Overall unique and interesting chapter. I like how you explained away our mc's god ki with yamoshi ancestory. I like your character moments and plot progression and not devolving into a power fantasy like most novels. I hope you keep it up.👍👍👍

ch 33 Dinner With a Destroyer

Dragon Ball: Back in Black

Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra

Kratos5627

2mth

Commented

Dude the pace has become very fast. slow it down a little. Let dante have some of that magic training that ancient one promised. Add some character development and thought processes of different people if you have to. back to back action can feel rushed to us readers.

ch 56 Chapter 55

In Marvel As Dante

Movies · RaedaX_1

Kratos5627

3mth

Commented

take my power stones but give me a chapter. Asap.

ch 52 Chapter 51

In Marvel As Dante

Movies · RaedaX_1

Kratos5627

3mth

Posted

The story is fine overall. But I would recommend author to change the first chapter as it was not a good impression overall. To me he felt like a entitled Chinese young master with all his complaints. The rest of the story is good. The character interactions are interesting and he is not a two dimensional character which is great. I would recommend the author to make his own original storylines and not follow the canon too much. Maybe explore magic which is inherent in db universe. You can also add interactions with other aliens that we had not seen otherwise in canon like tuffles. Add your own lore if you want to like him meeting yamoshi and other cool and og stuff. Instead of following the same cliches that everyone seems to follow. Give your own twist to evolution of Saiyan and including stuff from gt and xenoverse and all that good stuff to make it more interesting to us readers. These are just my suggestions. Peace.

Dragon Ball: Back in Black

Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra

Kratos5627

4mth

Replied to _VIIX_

I said "potentially" powerful. With the system and his angelic heritage. He would surpass og Dante eventually if author kept a consistent power development. As for quality. At least the characters are somewhat 3 dimensional. And grammar is readable. And not collect all girls as pokemon type fanfic. Which alone puts it above lots of novel in this platform. So yeah.

In Marvel As Dante

Movies · RaedaX_1

Kratos5627

4mth

Posted

One of the better fics out there in web novel in my opinion. Not a masterpiece by any means but a very good read nonetheless. It is always interesting seeing some good character growth and development. Some people may not like how relatively weak the protagonist is. But for me who has seen cliche multiversal dark edge lords making their harem. It is breath of fresh air for me personally. I mean potentially he is going to be even more op in the future than the og Dante which quite good in my opinion. The only thing that I can say to people who maybe reading this review is: