Like the way story developed, the power system is also good. It.can be improved in future. The way of writing is kinda like not of professional but one day hope it will be better and improved. Sometimes i got bored in middle but if i imagine scenery and the current situation totally imagined in my mind i can atleast bear with the boredom.
Fantasy · Adi_Kotha
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Like the way story developed, the power system is also good. It.can be improved in future. The way of writing is kinda like not of professional but one day hope it will be better and improved. Sometimes i got bored in middle but if i imagine scenery and the current situation totally imagined in my mind i can atleast bear with the boredom.
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Fantasy · Adi_Kotha