Badges 12
Moments 146
front of her Should be front of him He is pointing to where she should move.
"Aselia... can you come over here?" He pointed to the place in front of her. She gave him a curious look before scooting over in front of him.
Elven Encounter With A Blood Seeker
Fantasy · Sunny_Shumail
Last line Slowly leaked his hand Should be Slowly locked his hand
He looked at her in shock. She continued making those lewd but oh-so-sexy noises until he could no longer stand it. Since he couldn't say anything to her, he instinctively covered her lips with his palm. Lila was having fun at this point. Wanting to test his limits, she slowly leaked his palm making him moan.
The Venom That Saves
Urban · MUHACHE_JUMA
her mother need Should be her mother made
Unfortunately, she didn't know what was inside it. It was a heart-shaped golden locket. The string that was used to hang it over her neck was a common thread that her mother need. Yes. She could still remember how her mother changed the chains because her skin was allergic to them.
The Venom That Saves
Urban · MUHACHE_JUMA
About his screams Should be About her screams
"Ah!" A terrified scream left her mouth as one of them ripped apart her shirt. Their movements was almost robotic as if they had done this a thousand times before. Did to her clothes a path not giving a damn about his screams and the thrashing around she did.
Obsession: the Lycan king's Human Mate
Fantasy · Inara_Me
Small work Should be Small walk In this page all of the words 'work' Should be changed to 'walk'
"It's just a small walk," he provided with his toothy- fangy, smile. "Small work might leave you for the tensions you feel. After all those are not going to be good for your baby."
Obsession: the Lycan king's Human Mate
Fantasy · Inara_Me
She ckosed her eyes Should be She closed her
She cksoed her eyes and shook her head. Probably, nothing more she could do now and she knew it.
Obsession: the Lycan king's Human Mate
Fantasy · Inara_Me
This entire chapter is hilarious. Espescially because of her inner thoughts.
Nanahara Takeshi looked at her speechlessly for a while, then said directly, "You're not. The prerequisite of having sharp intuition is to have a brain; you don't meet the criteria."
I Am Not A Detective
Urban · Seabed Walker
out for the clause Should be out fur and claws
Adeline was now sitting in front of a desk but the doctor was still missing. As she waited she could only hope and pray in her mind continuously that she was not able for any kind of supernatural person. It was horrifying enough to know that she was dating a guy who gets out for and the clause at any time and rip her into shreds, now came and other information that she might be pregnant with his child and she was dealing with the supernatural Doctor Who could inform the guy at any time she wanted.
Obsession: the Lycan king's Human Mate
Fantasy · Inara_Me
she knew were Should be he knew were
Cassandra smiled but the words she said next, she knew were the bitter truth. "Maybe she would be the one who would know the best about what she wants. How about you take this as a sign, to tell the truth about us all?"
Obsession: the Lycan king's Human Mate
Fantasy · Inara_Me
Board a little Should be bowed a little
Both of them nodded and board a little to the king after which they left the room. The moment the door opened Alexander ran in as much as speed he could knowing that the footsteps coming after him were his brothers.
Obsession: the Lycan king's Human Mate
Fantasy · Inara_Me
Sir Kit walling him Should be Sir Kit calling him
'What was Sir Kit walling him? It was an easy name. Something with the element. But what?'
The Web of Knightspur
History · IrisSky
through the enemy houses Should be throw the enemy horses
The sky was getting darker and Sir Kit knew that they just need to wait till the night falls. Once they are in the dark, they can not get caught at all. All they need to do is stay put and wait for the right time to through the enemy houses off.
The Web of Knightspur
History · IrisSky
of that men Should be if that man
Because of that men could keep a bell in a locked room, he sure could do a lot of things. It still didn't make sense to me but I shook my head out of it. There was no use in thinking of such happening when I already had reality crashing down on me.
The Princess's Dangerous Vampire Mate
Fantasy · Inara_Me
appears so beautiful Should be appears more beautiful
“It is a pleasure to make your acquaintance, Nymph Queen. I have heard of your Kingdom, The Oasis mentioned from my mother on many occasions, but it appears so beautiful than what I imagined.”
The Hunt
Fantasy · KimAmai
Flopped his pawn Should be flopped his paw
The boss finally flopped his pawn at him, shrouding Jake in pain and shadow.
Supreme Archer: Taking The Game's Weakest Class To The Top
Games · HomieLv1
moved and stripped Should be moved and stepped
At the perceived threat, Darius quickly moved and stripped in front of Xenia.
The Crown's Entrapment
Fantasy · Eustoma_Reyna
End of paragraph., last sentence Lied in in it. Should be Layed in it.
"The irony." He scoffed. That Lycan had successfully dug the grave of his mate by his own hands and Noah was going to make sure that she lied in it.
Obsession: the Lycan king's Human Mate
Fantasy · Inara_Me
Near end paragraph, just want get him Should be just don't want get him
“I’m just scared of him because he’s sort of scary. He’s never really said anything or did anything to me. It’s just his aura and like I said it was because of a condition he became my guardian and he’s already doing something very important for me and he’s strict so that’s why I’m scared. I don’t want to lose him, he did me a great favor. I just want to get him mad. That’s all.”
Blood Bound
Urban · Chickennugget
Stop. " He Should be Stop." Her This is referring to Chay who is talking.
"STOP!" She yelled at me and then immediately coughed. "Just stop." He voice was a little rough and course after the coughing but the force of her words was still there.
Rescuing His Captive Mate: Saving The Future Luna
Fantasy · Deni_Chance