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Author, i don't think you'll need to edit it. it's fairly decent
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Might change this later but i like how the story is progressing so far. i can't really judge yet since it's pretty early on in the story, but i have a feeling it will be an interesting story. Grammar and spelling and overall writing quality is pretty good a bit better than your standard novels. There is some inconstancies in the perspectives like it randomly changed into first perspective but i'm assuming that's bc it was meant to be his thoughts? idk. i'm interested in the MC who has yet to be named, because the system seems to be confused about him. i think this story is worth checking out, but like i said, it's too early to judge.
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We don't even know YOUR name- Author did you not have his name yet or? Because for the profile thingy his name is a literal ???
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NO WHY?? IT'S ONLY THE SECOND CHAPTER AS WELL??
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congrats on the new cover.