Hmmm, interesting. Dota currently seems like Griffith/ Killua
'Shouldn't someone call the ambulance for these guys?' Yashiro said, and Rando reached into his pocket, got out his phone and began calling the emergency services.
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Some caps missing in the next few lines of dialogue
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Caps on This and the next two lines
'We don't usually use our powers on regular humans, but guys like that really get to Yashiro and I'
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Its cool how the story naturally unfolded to let us see what Yashiro was working on. It flowed well
'Yashiro you're not injured' the smile on his face got even wider and he punched Yashiro's arm. Yashiro laughed and scratched the back of his head, slightly embarrassed.
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W Rando!!
'GET YOUR FILTHY HANDS OFF HER!' he yelled, as he punched the thug so hard in the jaw that it became unhinged.
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A few more Capital letters
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Capital letter and question mark :)
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This reminds me of Dark souls and the 'age of fire' after Gwyn defeated the dragons
This brought about the "Golden Age" of heroes. A period were cities were much safer and crime rates were at an all time low because of the presence of "super heroes" keeping watch over their cities. However, some of the non-powered humans, or "regulars" as they were often called began to get angry. Some were jealous they weren't "blessed" with powers, while others weren't happy at the fact that these so called heroes were being praised and hailed like they were gods.
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Fire
At Minagawa, there was a collosal crater left at the site where the meteor had landed. To the villagers there, it served as a constant reminder of the disaster that happened there that day.
Fantasy · FlamingAcee
My low RAM struggles with japanese names smh
ch 0 -2 Characters and Powers
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Hmm, Personally, I think this may have been cooler if you showed that she was attractive, 2nd best detective and tries to overtake Fuhira
Horizon Academy
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