Karl_Dragoon - Profile

But he used it without a reason even if he used it unconscious he didn't had the affinity with the element yet. Even if he learned it unconscious doesn't make much sense to him learning like that.

Rock Lee is nothing compared with the effort that Zhang Gong Wei put into is training.

Yeah I felt that but maybe is because but maybe is because they believe the darkness is sacred or maybe they have some kind of Darkness Divinity.

MC remembering her when he add two girls at is side

Ok before I didn't understand Chris I writed that coment in the last chapter but even if the reason is good and theres a clear one like needs a good spiritual energy it feels weird accepting him being the teacher like that a little weird but that joke about the reason being the food seems a like a joke in a bad moment like normally taking a teacher is quite serious since a teacher or master is like a father in some ways but maybe I'm just taking it to deep because of think the funny moment was really that funny.

Wood and Metal could be interesting but life and death I don't think it would work well besides it would be very difficult to explain besides you have light and dark weren't shown and even the Chaos element that could work in some ways, maybe like a life and death fusion kind of power.

Even if its a good teacher student idea it was a little rushed I think even if Grey is in a good stop like great talent and dual elements the part of the teacher doesn't make much sense since we just know that is name is Chris is probably really strong, is connected with the Lunar Academy and likes food besides as a legendary gryffin but we don't know is element for exemple since he wants Grey probably he has a Lightning element since the elements have different characteristics and teaching an element different that the one you have seems weird. Possible explanation he is like Tang San of the novel Douluo Dalu and that besides being weak he has made many searchs and is the number 1 expert about the subject but Chris personality doesn't fit much in the smart type and the story is directing to much in the diresction that he is extremely powerful.

We need to understand better the levels of power and how far which one is from the others. But really you just gave to MC the fruit just like that he didn't even nor tried to get it. Upgrading the lighting element because of him using a burst of thunder ok but the wind element just like that is not normal you should have made it clear that he was understanding the wind element like when he rided the gryffin and felt the wind or when he was fighting the wind wolves and was being attack by the wind blades this two moments could be used like places so he would start understandin the wind but just like that doesn't make sense or even if you wanted you could have done like the MC being attack by wind mages and he starts fighting and reading is movements upgrading is understanding there were a lot of ways to do it or maybe you wanted to be like this but didn´t put enough information, But let me say the oart where I talk about he starting understanding the wind there has a flaw since you explained that the wind was being controled by the gryffin and didn't touch them,

I really expect that this was something that will useful completely understandable in the future. But if its just sudden surge of power because its cool or is just a mechanism without a reason to save the protagonist when he is in real danger I would like to say: -One it seems a way to just end the battle but doesn't make sense because we don't know what overlord experts do. -Two how was it possible for him to do that was a effect because of the pearl it's possible but the story until where I remember doesn't say nothing about it. What makes it look like you wanted a cool scene and you are going to explain in the future. Look I'm not saying that is bad I think its dope scene but you needed to let some clues in the other chapters before just so it doesn't seem Deus Ex Machina .

Right Arm of the Sect Leader

Everyone in this world has an element at least so is father and mother must have a element to. I understand not knowing the father's but I think it could have been said the mother's element at the start.Like the son was about to be tested but before he would said that wanted the same element has is mother or asked about the element that is mother had, but this is just thinking about it because I'm curious about the element that she wields.