Get a friend or someone to reread and edit what you've written just so you can avoid silly mistakes or poor sentence structuring
A so interested about hearing your ideas :
Anime & Comics · The_Immortal159
Reminds me of a phoenix
Their strange appearance was not something strange to him, in fact he already feel that this race was related to one of his first creations...
Anime & Comics · The_Immortal159
Its less about your grammar and more about your wording I really like your story so far though
Reincarnated as a Tower In the Multiverse
Anime & Comics · The_Immortal159