huh? you moved ? At least you're still releasing good stuff can see you've corrected some of the grammatical errors, can't wait to see what you have in store for us
Sci-fi · peace01
I think this story has a couple of errors, but it can be better. The writing style was definitely constant and engaging, however, there are times when the scenes felt rushed.
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huh? you moved ? At least you're still releasing good stuff can see you've corrected some of the grammatical errors, can't wait to see what you have in store for us
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Sci-fi · peace01