Webnovel Author: Rai_Arashi - Novel&Fanfic Collection

Rai_Arashi

20d

Posted

If you have any question that your would like answered and are currently caught up with the novel then ask here.

The Last kings system

Fantasy · Rai_Arashi

Rai_Arashi

20d

Replied to ShowmikBD

Not currently, but there will be later in the novel.

The Last kings system

Fantasy · Rai_Arashi

Rai_Arashi

1mth

Posted

So this is where i would prefer for people to put their suggestions for Name of the Elf girl, the deadline is the 21st. and if you just have any questions about the story feel free to ask

The Last kings system

Fantasy · Rai_Arashi

Rai_Arashi

2mth

Posted

If you have questions ask them on here, I'll respond to them as much as I can without spoiling the story

The Systems Last Venom

Fantasy · Rai_Arashi

Rai_Arashi

5mth

Commented

So the powers that they have slighty confuse me but maybe Im just dumb, but the pacing is a little fast and that makes some things possibly confusing so I would try to work on slowing the pacing quite a bit but decent chapter.

ch 0 2 Chapter 2: Strange World And Strange People

Journey Across

Fantasy · scarycereal

Rai_Arashi

5mth

Replied to scarycereal

It is good that you can see some of the issues you have please try to fix the paceing issue since the character development can be showed in latter chapters

Journey Across

Fantasy · scarycereal

Rai_Arashi

5mth

Commented

Im a little confused on some of the things you have but the concept seems to be kinda of solid so good job. ill keep reading it for a while if there in improvement so best of luck.

ch 0 1 Chapter One: Fresh Beginning

Journey Across

Fantasy · scarycereal

Rai_Arashi

5mth

Posted

As the Authro of this book I’ll ask anyone if they have any questions or suggestions for me if so reply to this comment

Eclipsed realms

Fantasy · Rai_Arashi

Rai_Arashi

5mth

Replied to Elysian_weaver

Loved the book so far, and as a fellow author I can just recommend to not listening to the hate but to also still listening since some people will give real advice

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Rai_Arashi

5mth

Posted

I have only just finished the 6th chapter but I think that this book has potential, keep writing author many other authors will quit when they don't see progress in views but just keep writing

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Rai_Arashi

5mth

Commented

Other than the issue with the text saying 5 out of 100 exp and then when the status screen says 5 out of 10 exp I would say that this book so far is pretty good for a start, I hope you continue to write and not quit like many authors