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Meh. Leans too much into OP nonsense with nothing for the MC to actually put that strength towards. Characterisation of each antagonist is super weak as well. They're barely even characters

starts off OK but goes down the well very quickly with the mad death eater plot.

Trashy patreon bait. MC comes across as pathetic when you have to constantly state how cool and strong he is.

So much for an improved translation. It's barely readable.

Google translate like English makes this near impossible to read. Also what's the point in including the MCs relation with Tsunade if you're just going to skip over it?Why have the MC keep calling the kids smelly? Is it supposed to be his catchphrase or something?