Hello, I am currently around chapter 1000 and I wanted to make a review of the story so far. First I want to say that I like the story so far, the concept is original and the characters make rational desicions. Their developement is also interseting, for example how jake progressively learn how to open to others and then is progressively influenced by the corruption. I like the power scaling up to Quanoth, but after that, I find the jake is progressing at a ridiculous speed. During the ordeal, he goes from physical stats around 1000 to stats around 200 000, so 200 times stronger. In comparaison, the year of training before made jake stats multiply by at most 5. For the romance part, if the female lead is indeed ruby, then I have to say that the fact that she is a digestor is pretty cool, but still, I would have appreciated to see their relashionship evolve a bit faster; they still dislike each other after 1000 chapters ! Finaly, for the 5th ordeal, I like the reintroduction of min ho and amy that we had not seen since the 1rst ordeal, and I hope that we will also see lu Yan and her brother again. Anyway, this is just my personal oppinion, and I want to say again that I find this story very good. Good Luck !
Sci-fi · Arkinslize
Hi, we are only at the beginning of the story, but I wanted to share my initial thoughts about the novel. First I want to say that I like the story very much for the moment and I hope that you will continue writing it. I like the fact that Umut is not blinded by his revenge against his familiy as in many novels. I find it more realistic since he has been raised in this cave with his mother who promoted the value of every life since he was very little. Umut don't seem to have a precise goal for the moment, and it is also logical since he just arrived in the world of humans again, and if I were him, I would also be a bit lost. However, I find the punishement of the family a bit too extreme. They don't gain anything by torturing these kids instead of just killing them or sending them away. I hope that we will learn more about this familly in the future in order to better understand their mindset. The fact that Umut is manabound has a lot of potential and I am exited to see what are the implications. Anyway, good work so far, I realy hope to see this novel continiue !!
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Hello, I am currently around chapter 1000 and I wanted to make a review of the story so far. First I want to say that I like the story so far, the concept is original and the characters make rational desicions. Their developement is also interseting, for example how jake progressively learn how to open to others and then is progressively influenced by the corruption. I like the power scaling up to Quanoth, but after that, I find the jake is progressing at a ridiculous speed. During the ordeal, he goes from physical stats around 1000 to stats around 200 000, so 200 times stronger. In comparaison, the year of training before made jake stats multiply by at most 5. For the romance part, if the female lead is indeed ruby, then I have to say that the fact that she is a digestor is pretty cool, but still, I would have appreciated to see their relashionship evolve a bit faster; they still dislike each other after 1000 chapters ! Finaly, for the 5th ordeal, I like the reintroduction of min ho and amy that we had not seen since the 1rst ordeal, and I hope that we will also see lu Yan and her brother again. Anyway, this is just my personal oppinion, and I want to say again that I find this story very good. Good Luck !
The Oracle Paths
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