Moments 8
great chapter so far
ch 0 6 The Web of Doom.
STORM OVER A PARADISE:THE DARK LOOM
Urban · Timothy_Odhiambo
no way, I did not expect this, it great.
He turned the clump open and though it was Ann before him, in the mind of his eyes he came to see her and smiled when he saw her smile. Chris's aspect dallied on Ann for a moment, taking in her appearance. Ann shifted slightly under his gaze, feeling a bit tone-conscious. But he watched not, he was obsessed. She looked up at him and snappily knew commodity was amiss.
STORM OVER A PARADISE:THE DARK LOOM
Urban · Timothy_Odhiambo
seriously, someone wet dreaming, just like this
Maybe he was just ignoring it for he wanted to stay a little longer by her side but now came an alternate knock, one that indeed the dead could not cease to hear, so he muttered a little and smiled to the wind and rose from his slumber.
STORM OVER A PARADISE:THE DARK LOOM
Urban · Timothy_Odhiambo
this is weakly brought out
" Her name is Amelia," she began in a low, tender tone. He felt as if there was ether in the veritably sound of her name. And physically, too, he sounded like an airy spirit-Ariel, intolerant to be set free.
STORM OVER A PARADISE:THE DARK LOOM
Urban · Timothy_Odhiambo
this dramatic change is so marvelous, I did not even see it coming.
He approached the beach from afar. The fog dispersed, revealing a wonder. A sight so strange, so marvelous. Beyond his wildest dreams and fears.
STORM OVER A PARADISE:THE DARK LOOM
Urban · Timothy_Odhiambo
[img=fp]The book is a captivating and emotional story that explores the theme of love and obsession in a realistic and poetic way. The author uses vivid descriptions and evocative language to create a rich and immersive setting that is inspired by his native country, Kenya. The characters are well-developed and complex, especially the protagonist Chris, who is torn between his love for Laura and his obsession with Amelia. The plot is full of twists and turns, leading to a tragic and shocking climax that reveals the destructive power of lies. The book also has some elements of magical realism, such as the curse of the black pearl and the Mayan priest, which add a fantastical dimension to the story. I enjoyed reading this book and I would recommend it to anyone who likes romance, mystery, and drama. The book has a unique style and voice that makes it stand out from other books in the same genre. The book also raises some interesting questions about the nature of love, obsession, and truth.
STORM OVER A PARADISE:THE DARK LOOM
Urban · Timothy_Odhiambo